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crystalline canopies shake above me
sparkling distractions wink their charm
what lies beyond pulls the veil from my eyes
and I find my hands leaving my face

as the night unfolds the chapters of my life
the trees have my words etched into their trunks
leaves rain down the whispers of my childhood
I kept my path with breadcrumbs in a forest filled with hungry birds

the reflection in the pond holds an identity
fragmented images in a clear natural state
the blue in my eye catches the blue in the water
that extinguishes the fire from the fallen star I hold



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On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, island warrior (300) writes:
I absolutely love this, it left me spellbound.


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Jewelnique (8) writes:
first thing=>i agree with Choronzon very beautiful, second=> my fave lines, "sparkling distractions wink their charm," "leaves rain down the whispers of my childhood"


On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Choronzon (226) writes:
Beautiful poem, Saralyn. The second stanza ruled the most. Awesome work, bud, and Tim's right.


On Monday November 8th, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:
I miss you posting new stuff all the time...you're one of my favorites here.*sighs and remembers the good old days*


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Enchanting and full of wisdom. Gorgeous imagery.


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, batman nipples (2241) writes:
This is illustrious and just brilliant. I've missed your works, Sarilyn. Glad to you see you posting again.


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
cool write - the second stanza was awsome!!!



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