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I have a Holocaust Literature class right now, and for our assignments we have a few choices on how we want to represent the works we have read for the week. After reading about the ghetto situation throughout the Holocaust, I chose to write a poem. I don't think it's all that great, but I'm turning it in tomorrow morning anyway. I hope I have written it in a tasteful and respectful manner. Tell me what you think?


hidden faces harbor misplaced memories
of the lives they once enjoyed
as faith was placed in hope and prayer
their lives were being destroyed

surrounded by walls of hate and wire
the wire didn't sting as badly
as the ignorant persecution of the 6 million souls
and the barbaric mutilation of family

inside the ghetto walls, a hope for a better life
just as a rose can grow through soil
but with the imminent coming of the final solution
the promise of that life did spoil

tucked away like there was never a problem
out of sight, out of mind
while the rest of the world went on with their business
genocide was busy stealing time
from the nameless victims packed away like rats
behind barbed-wire cage-door lines
because after you've dehumanized something long enough
it's apparently not a crime?



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On Sunday November 16th, 2008, satanshallrise (8) writes:
this one is also very good you are an awesome poet


On Sunday October 17th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:
_i can't believe i let this slip past me...it lives up to what i expect from you,Sarilyn...that no nonsense feel,the powerful drive...and moving as always.lovely,Sarilyn.


On Saturday October 9th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
thats what i love about your work...very dynamic. variety-nothing montonous. you always seem to surprise me. well done...


On Thursday October 7th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
this was really wrought with pain.. took my breath and choked it... amazingly done!


On Thursday October 7th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:
There is just not enough room to say what I need to say...The very idea you have captured in this piece goes way beyond the words typed on my flickering screen. I can feel it, I am there.


On Thursday October 7th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:
The description alone is enough to take my breath away, "after you've dehumanized something long enough it's apparently not a crime?" hit me hard. Very respective, not too gorey, or dark, just painful.


On Thursday October 7th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:
If your teacher don't like this, he or she doesn't know what is good. This is awesome.


On Thursday October 7th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
hmm...i like it. i think your teacher will to



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