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I reached my hands out in front of me
to catch what I thought was there
I looked up into the gold and brown leaves
and found beauty in something dead

I hold my hand first before giving it away
so I'm assured at least one squeeze
the figure in the mirror smiles vibrantly
I hope they pay close attention

snapshots hammered into apathetic walls
as we set fire to the entire house
I can't stand when you kick the backs of my knees
at some point you have to let me win

I steal your flame's oxygen
and as it holds its breath
the smoke fills up my glass
a representation of my innocence

we stitched our legs and arms together
my mouth has been sewn shut
and if you smile then we both smile
through my bleeding mouth




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On Friday September 3rd, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
very nice sara. i dont know why i dont check out your writing more often..." I steal your flame's oxygen and as it holds its breath" now that unblemished poetry to my eyes. nicely done.


On Monday August 30th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
Cool... There's something subtly creepy about this. I liked the flame metaphor ;)


On Tuesday August 24th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
good write...last verse was captivating


On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
"the figure in the mirror smiles vibrantly / I hope they pay close attention"... something about this couplet really appeals to me. evocative and well expressed piece, this... fine write. :)


On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
excelent imagery--I am personally a fan of the sewn shut type of expression--nicely done



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