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Heat Exhaustion

combative kindling, lips flicker blue
eyes and embers reveal the same
I've destroyed entire forests for you
since the first time you set me aflame

please don't touch me
I can't take your heat
will you have me
I'm skipping beats

our breath together is melodic
I time to the rhythm of your skin
your fingertips burn portraits on my flesh
you engulf me over and over again

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On Sunday January 27th, 2008, SGT Bloth (191) writes:

Oh my wow.....Umm I really didn't know how else to put it...from one eroticist to another...very nicely put ;}= Bloth

On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:

i love it! that is so awesome!

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, Seraphic (289) writes:

god, that was so smoothly written, and passionate, YOU'RE BACK! *hugs* Beautiful piece. *~seraph~*

On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, NikesRain (1420) writes:

smooth at the switch and intense thoughout. nicely done indeed.

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

The intensity of this was delicious, gorgeous, passionate descriptions. such an atmosphere you've created.. I agree with purr, those lines are absolutely wonderful. Awesome work.

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:

gorgeous little pocket of passion! i love the last two lines in the first stanza especially. :)

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

intense write, well-written. -MeL-

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:

i agree with OLd...very tasty....yummy!;)

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, Choronzon (226) writes:

I like how it changes in the middle. The last two lines are killer. Nevermind, it's all awesome.

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:

_and i agree with Matt.the 2nd verse was a really effective change-up.

On Thursday July 1st, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

err.. uhh..yeah.. mm.. well, that was tasty. I love the first and last verse.. intensely passionate. :::OLd

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