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arms in the air
take your blank stare
never really there
to this we don't care

I give up now, what's the use in trying
what we had before is obviously dying
I've had enough of all my senseless crying
a promise from you is just you lying

I've asked but you don't answer me
I want something that will never be
I'm next to you but you don't even see
I locked my heart and you destroyed the key

did I do something to you to deserve what I got
to be lifted by a lie just as soon to be dropped
look at my face and tell me you forgot
show me I was stupid for loving what I sought

turn away
another day
for this I pay
this macabre play

deserved this
for feelings missed
another blacklist
for the nothing I kissed



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On Saturday July 24th, 2004, An Expired Member (69) writes:
a promise from you is just you lying I've asked but you don't answer me I want something that will never be I'm next to you but you don't even see I locked my heart and you destroyed the key best parts i crawled inside those and died


On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Endifference (258) writes:
I want to put this to music...heavy, dirty, screaming music. It'd fit methinks. -END-


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, SilencedAngel (60) writes:
Amazing piece of work. I was floored when I was done reading. I can't wait to read more of your work.


On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, TheArtOfX (104) writes:
you're really good with finishing poems off... I wish I could make good endings like you do. i like the meaning behind this poem a lot, too..


On Friday March 26th, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:
_very sad...and pure.with a resigned intensity...this poem fuses the styles of the old stellar with the style of newer stellar turned purple perfectly.i hope i make sense.-tim


On Friday March 26th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
a very sad piece indeed. has a real sense of final melancholy coldness to it. *sends hug*


On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Choronzon (226) writes:
*Hugs* Great work, dude.


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:
wow i can really relate to that a lot i like it nice write. ~darlin


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
oh dark indeed, i love it.~~~Grave


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
very dark. remnants of past thoughts...memories to be forgotten but always there in your mind. well done.



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