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what it was
what was meant to be
what it is
what will never be

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On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Endifference (258) writes:

Too common, too often. -END-

On Wednesday June 2nd, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

wow, 4 short sentences & a whole lota power. greatness in mere few words. wonderful! *thumbs up

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

lol.. sure is evil.. I totaly agree with Tiger.. btw nice going. I like it short :O) Monkey

On Thursday April 15th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~ss

On Friday March 26th, 2004, SilentStalker (1316) writes:

...saw it that time too...we were thinking the same when you first posted this...probably still are... -Darun

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

I agree, this was done well, short and to the point...^vTracerv^

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

i know i cant totally see where you coming from. with such little words the meaning in this blew me off my feet. f-cking awesome.

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Alanarchy (1698) writes:

I love condensed poetry when it is done well. This was excellent. The length only gives substance to the title and how long a bad relationship can last. A great point written wonderfully. Well done.

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Drea (917) writes:

relationship BAW! What's the point they always end the sam...oops sorry lol So short, to the point, no bullshitting. *Fav*

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Reverend Machine (90) writes:

I feel that the length is unimportant as long as the message is clear, this one intrigues me in the sense the the last 2 lines are a paradox

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:

Evil poem! *pointing fingers for a few minutes, and favors* Tiger

On Friday March 12th, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:

_15 words,boys and girls...if there were a class called minimalism101,this would be the foundation.-tim

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