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"Lament for the lost" by Lord Kalgalath

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A gentle spewing of tender words of comfort
Deaf ears
the only ones to hear the murmurs of forgotten mourners
Face of an obsidian column
sheathed in flesh as yeilding
cloaked in desolations dew
dripping slowly
from eyes of garnet hue
wary of all
for nothing seems true
so the pen carves paper
like knives for you
and the parchment shards
pierce your soul through
each with the words that you dread to hear
so we hang between the lines
of what we'll compensate for
A flotilla of rafts drifting farther from shore
never suspecting that this was in store
despite all the tales and all the lost lore
noone could have ever felt this before
as though realities rent
and the walls torn down
as we commit our dear friend
to the cold ground.

For Atalanta,
And all the others we have lost.



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On Sunday April 17th, 2005, Angst Queen (470) writes:
Vivid and painful. You express things so well


On Saturday February 12th, 2005, sIo (845) writes:
the beggining was magnificent. words i could see in my mind. amazing work.


On Friday January 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (51) writes:
That was so amazing... Filled with such emotion... - Holly


On Wednesday January 19th, 2005, suicideseason (2103) writes:
So vivid...Awesome.


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
oh christ, Dev...*hugs*


On Friday January 14th, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
This was a co-op.. two others helped me, but it was a long time agao, and I've just had it sitting.. I don't remember who it was so if it was you come forth and take your credit.


On Friday January 14th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (488) writes:
so sad to read. you expressed the pain of losing a friend very well. that is something hard to do. beautiful display of painful emotion! ~sex~


On Thursday January 13th, 2005, GirlintheBox (50) writes:
i like the rhyming "ore's"


On Thursday January 13th, 2005, ardneK (100) writes:
In the beginning I was hooked, I could feel your emotion, but then it started to fall apart at the end, I think it started with the rhyming 'ore's. It ruins the piece. But all in all good write - >|


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:
this was so sad and full of dispair, it weighed down my heart as i read it, and it read like the slow roll of a tear drop ~kristy


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Solace (1401) writes:
They are the memories that haunt the night in the bitter hours...They are the worst I think. Imagining them behind the corner, or in lookalikes down the street...Hard thoughts...



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