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++ around text indicates the priests words heard in the background :D
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+let us bow our heads now in prayer+

why am i so calm?
i should be infuriated
my blood is on your palm
a deep wound youve dealt

+may these two young people have joy and harmony+

what were the words we said
a pack of lies from your forked tongue
you are the one who broke the Vow
you are the one who lacerated our love

+to have and to hold+

now i am lost
you were always my guiding light
someone i could depend on
my love

+Dearly beloved+

still i find no anger in me
and despite your betrayal
no hatred for you
but this i cannot let slide

+Ashes to ashes Dust to dusr+

I dont taste anything in my tea
But i was hoping we could work this out
no chance, youre leaving me....
have some more tea

+We commit these bodies to the earth+

so long ive loved you
scince first we met
way back when
remeber...

+and thier spirits to Heaven+

all i have ever wanted was you
everything i ever achieved was for you
you were my reason to BE
and if i cannot have you with me in life

Then let us rot in peices

+Amen+





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On Saturday February 12th, 2005, sIo (845) writes:
god your work is insane. so much love....and deception. i am once again speechless.


On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
damn...this sends a rush of feelings into my body


On Monday November 8th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:
This was sensational! I love the ending and I love the way you worked in the priest. VERY nicely done, babe. -Glass


On Monday November 8th, 2004, NikesRain (1420) writes:
i liked the form of this, the calm tone throughout the whole thing. Like a factual resignation. well done indeed.


On Thursday November 4th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (488) writes:
damn, i think this is the best thing i have ever read!!! you are amazing... i truly loved this! ~sex~


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
I'm not sure what to say, I can't describewhat runs through my mind as I read this hon. wonderful work to say the least... Kya


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:
Eerie. I like the 'I don't taste anything in my tea' idea as well as the together dead or alive idea. Great piece. ~Ship!


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:
_well fucking done,my good man...perfect execution..."Then let us rot in peices"...Amen,indeed.fucking brilliant.


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
well done. A_C


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Dommi (122) writes:
Ouch.. I'm glad to see a new post by you.I've missed reading your stuff.. This was well executed, but painful at the same time. The priest lines were a good touch.. nice work dahling. <3Dommi


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
oh that was well done - excellent format too!


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, indefined (679) writes:
lush and shadowed, well put together, the whole priest thing before the verses really ticked well in my head. good stuff.


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, elisa (1987) writes:
intense dedication.....reminds me of 'All Of My Love' by Led Zep....with this kind of love i would live forever:) elisa


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
dark and powerful... i loved the concept and structure ... great write...


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Sin (1622) writes:
wow...very bitter and dark, nice ~kristy



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