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"Death of the Condemned" by Lord Kalgalath

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sliding slowly
a silibant whisper of promised peace
wrapping 'round my neck
this loathsome coil



-silence me-



tie a knot
long sleek and tight
affix the other end securely
it has to hold for the stop



-after the drop-



see the crowd gather
see them all stare
brought the kids i see
picnic stuff too



-hell awaits-



a spectacle
is this all i am
amusement for the masses
dinner theatre?



-don the black hood-



walking outside
the cheers and the jeers
a childs wide eyed stare
this evil must die



-mount the steps-



look around at this world
so cold and heartless
the sands of time, for me
have just run low



-feel the door creak-



the people all watch in silence
the hood goes on
then the noose
heavy assurance of death



-reading out the crimes-



the crowd loves it
like football sunday
rise up and cheer
to see a man die



-pull the lever-



a swift drop
the rope snaps taut
the man gasps his final breath
though the rope and hood



-he is still-



they pack up and leave
spectacle over
corpse is thrown in a pit
with so many others



-just another dead body-





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On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
The sad thing about this is the truth of it


On Friday August 27th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
I liked this but after reading the comments I fell heartless and twisted


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, NikesRain (1429) writes:
like the way you structured this. Great imagery and depiction of how heartless humans can be when they're not facing their own death. Great job.


On Friday August 20th, 2004, Death (30) writes:
I agree with Rain, this was like watching a movie in my mind. I love the part where everyone leaves as soon as he's dead.


On Friday August 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
I LOVE this peom Devon, people can be cold and to the point huh? but anyways, this was like a movie playing in my mind.... Kya


On Thursday August 12th, 2004, Dommi (124) writes:
wow... very nicely done.. i loved the way you portrayed just how twisted people are. great job. <3Always Dommi


On Thursday August 12th, 2004, Deadly Embrace (44) writes:
one word.. "amazing" -DE


On Monday August 9th, 2004, evolve (2294) writes:
This is one of those poems that develops in plot as you read, opening the reader to another world as they hasten to move on faster and faster..at least that's how I read it. This was somewhat unpleasant, but very well written. Exceptional.


On Monday August 9th, 2004, elisa (2021) writes:
you would think there would be peace in death but nope...makes me disgusted with the mob who prolly purchased a ticket from 'ticketmaster'. great poem! I understand the view you wrote it from:)


On Monday August 9th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
ahhhh tim, where would DP be without your humour. He's right though devon, incredible imagery. The stepping stones in this lead the walker through each peice of this enigmatic puzzle. Great write indeed, intruiging.


On Monday August 9th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:
lmao@tim...anyway this was an awesome write.the begining lines just put a noose around your troat.no pun intended.again nice write.****-knight


On Monday August 9th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_dude...killer.you gave a superbowl atmosphere to an execution.i can almost hear the roar of the crowd.and smell the popcorn.well done.


On Monday August 9th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
...i have been back several times.you portray this like a festive occasion...it's like a fucking carnival.incredible imagery.



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