DarkPoetry -|- Lord Kalgalath -|- AA

Get a bottle,
Crawl inside,
Such a cozy place,
When you want to hide,
Pull the cap back
Never leave

Drown my sorrows
Flood my fears
Come back out
In a few long years

Look around
Nothings changed
Same damn people
Still deranged

Crawl back then
Comfort lies within

Wash away the cares
In an amber flood

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On Thursday April 19th, 2007, Clementine (153) writes:

i just need to comment again, this is still crap

On Monday July 11th, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:

your clarity and use of visual imagery is astounding... 1, Seth

On Friday May 27th, 2005, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

I like this alot,I can relate and so can alot of other people thanks! I love this~xXx

On Monday February 14th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

this had a really good flow to it ~~GOTHIC~~

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

you write very well. i like this and i've seen this happen

On Sunday August 22nd, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

I really like this write. *JiNx*

On Friday August 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:

Very nice write Devon, This was emotional and to the point... Kya

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, nell (328) writes:

i liked it mucho....funny how this is the exact reason people go to AA lol

On Monday August 9th, 2004, evolve (2247) writes:

The emotion behind this is evident. Intense write.

On Sunday August 8th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

_i can relate to this...that amber flood sure feels good sometimes.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, SilentStalker (1320) writes:

...for not having a consistent rhyme, I must say I actually enjoy reading your work here...and that's no sugar coat...lol...nicely done... -Darun

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Dommi (123) writes:

i thought it was quite nicely done.. you dont give yourself enough credit devon. hehe good job. <3Dommi

On Thursday August 26th, 2004, NikesRain (1422) writes:

I agree with Dommi, you write very well, As with this. Nicely done

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:

I liked it. Make mine a Natural Brew Root Beer.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Violet (95) writes:

good poem. i love the first stanza. i rather would like to crawl inside a Snapple iced tea bottle.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, GirlintheBox (50) writes:

love it love it love it *krystal*

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

id rather drink kerosene

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

kerosens has more of a kick to it...but then you have the whole sickness from petroleum products.... not fun

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

this is a good write man,heh i liked the last part,but the poem is what it is,the meanings are apparant in its style,an so i need say no more other than its a good work

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Whisper (137) writes:

I like this write. -BT-

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