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I have lain here in darkness forever it seems
writhing in agony at the flames
which burn but never consume me
I am hollow inside again
All the more hollow for having been filled with that feeling

As I lay here
on my self-made bed of nails
their cruel barbed points
sinking slowly in
I cry out to the emptyness

Trust not hope
that hateful emotion
it is an exit that leads ot worlds of illusion and delusion
an empty release

I have ripped out my own heart
and now i must eat it
grinning all the while to hide the hurt
i scream a lament to the stars
as cold and distant as we have become

I will walk on, cloaked in my sorrow
This my freinds is my final goodbye,
the person you know is gone, he is dead
as you read this his shell walks on, but the essence is gone
if you see him, say hello, for he is utterly alone



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On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
deep, dark, cold....a feeling i get rather often. amazing work dev


On Friday August 27th, 2004, urbanhumility (1366) writes:
this is deep within the heart of despair........touchingly cold.......well done......urban


On Sunday August 22nd, 2004, evolve (2294) writes:
I find your pain vivid and somehow romanticized...brilliant.


On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, cre (508) writes:
Ahh . . this is so sad and filled with despair. I really like the stanza that begins with "Trust not hope" . .


On Saturday July 31st, 2004, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
this is beautiful devon...sheer perfection in its own right...great write... kya


On Monday July 26th, 2004, sixsixnine (567) writes:
BIGTIME KICKNASS WORK!!! loved this piece* very well said & the flow keeps one wanting more... *669*


On Sunday July 11th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
i scream a lament to the stars as cold and distant as we have become-this is an excellent line...and the emotion throughout is painfully clear...good write, i'm off to read more


On Sunday July 11th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
what a wonderful write. you are good my friend. A_C


On Sunday July 11th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
I have seen few peices that portray this ripping as brilliantly as this one. Absolutley outstanding.


On Thursday July 29th, 2004, NikesRain (1429) writes:
I agree with Azz, this whole write vivid, raw and forceful. Brilliant.


On Sunday July 11th, 2004, Anth (1613) writes:
truelly emotional and powerful write,some really great lines in this and a lingering empty feeling projects itself



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