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Flawed

i can feel the rage,
the pain and sorrow,
the darkness within grows a little more
the light is gone

so cold out here
when youre alone
when you have noone to guide
and no one to guide you...

I stumble and fall
a deep pit of melancholy
like tar..
drawing me deeper into its blackness

every moment reminded of that betrayal
and deep the personal darkness of my soul
i know..
i am forever flawed

imperfect vessel..
i cannot be made right
Im just not good enough
and i never will be

and there isnt one damn thing i can do about it...

because i am flawed

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On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (855) writes:

and your flaws make you the wonderfull person you are.

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

imperfection is a bitch, but at the same time it can be a good thing

On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Sin (1636) writes:

~imperfect vessel.. i cannot be made right~ so many times ive felt the same way, you expressed your pain beautifully ~kristy

On Friday August 20th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_i can relate so well to your words...so much regret and sorrow...damaged goods. awesome in a being down,out, and laughed at kind of way.rock on,Devon.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

*ponders* are u describing my life or yours?? great write!!

On Friday July 9th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

The flawlessness that most seek is found in what most people don't see as a flaw...wonderfully done.

On Thursday June 24th, 2004, Cwn Annwn (107) writes:

Your writing hasn't a flaw...~GoNe~

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

Like tar...Your pic is brilliant too...

On Friday March 19th, 2004, Bluegoddess (61) writes:

ahh.. darkness at its lonliest... tradgic, or beautiful, depends how you look at it.. lovely write.. ~blue

On Wednesday March 17th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

well, everyone is flawed, and there is truly nothing we may do about it except focus on our strengths and have friends that boost you up...sorry, My squirrel arms aren't quite big enough to lift you up though...lol

On Wednesday March 17th, 2004, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

maybe you're being sarcastic, but being "flawed" in your cases makes you wiser then those bozos...they thought einstein was crazy, now look at him+fallen one+

On Wednesday March 17th, 2004, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

lol besides einstein being dead he has made a name for himself+fallen one+

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

thank you Orchid..and you too signs..

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (159) writes:

I must disagree. You're good enough in my eyes, more than good enough. You befriended me and since then you have done nothing but try to brighten my day. I like this poem but I hope someday you may feel differently.

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (159) writes:

I'm here for you if you ever need me. You're so goddamn awesome... Haha, great job on the poem! *hugs* =-MO-=

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, whisperer (169) writes:

tragic and soo in-fucking-crediblei relate in too many ways...-]darkness[-

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