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"halloween & the 24th of january" by shortandpretentious

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slouched but tightly holding your hand
in mine we walked at the same
pace the click of your shoes echoed
across the bridge you straightened mentioned
similar strides perfect copies really

that couple walks to their own electric
internal beat laughing love
maybe, when i saw you later that night
i picked up my pace and started to run


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On Monday May 14th, 2007, carlosjackal (1615) writes:
@=)))))))) Magic lies herein -Carl


On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Lynaes (1139) writes:
"that couple walks to their own electric internal beat laughing love".. that part alone is stunning.. simply beautiful. wow.


On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:
Say what you must in 256 characters or less please =) cool


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, Solace (1419) writes:
Really this is highly commendable writing, the style and its candid brief expression...it is truly a defining piece of work, well rounded and strangely hauntingly enchanting, suits the halloween part i suppose :)


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, purr_verse (1439) writes:
This is outstanding. *faves*


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
'maybe when I saw you later that night I picked up my pace and started to run'..*sighs* I want a book with all of your poetry in it.Just so it was right there..and I could reach out for it whenever I wanted..


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, blue (1784) writes:
:) damn fine writing, a wave of refreshment. Thank you. ~b


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, frozen (751) writes:
awesome write



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