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emotional dildo turned angry former lover

if you want me to become someone else
i will

shed emotion with clothes & dive
between your sheets
nothing special nothing new
this moment will live forever
in your mind filed under
"what could have been"

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On Friday March 25th, 2005, Carmina Gitana (114) writes:

Heh. "If you want a lover, I'll do anything you ask me to." Loved this.

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, sIo (892) writes:

this just plain rocked. great write.

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, blue (1751) writes:

hmm...curious. ~b

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Lynaes (1129) writes:

"this moment will live forever in your mind filed under "what could have been"" Damn.. Again, ouch. I don't know what to say other than that is some brutal, yet kickass wording. I love this.

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Oh my god...ouch..

On Monday January 17th, 2005, flying_fox (769) writes:

I really like this... short and to the point. It hits you like a shot of tequila. Great stuff.

On Monday January 17th, 2005, Storm (185) writes:

That file always fills up so quickly :( Ver good write!

On Sunday January 16th, 2005, Chimauron (126) writes:

Are you the one who does allthe titles for Cannibal Corpse? :) OK, bad joke. But good little poem. Short, sweet, to the point. I like!

On Sunday January 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:

I like it

On Sunday January 16th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

good flow, nice work! very interestingly done. and nice title...

On Sunday January 16th, 2005, MindRape (890) writes:

ha ha! this was awesome! Not only do i identify with the poem, like the flow, and the additude but,

On Sunday January 16th, 2005, MindRape (890) writes:

your name and this poem go hand in hand in an uncanny similarity to my life. I love it when I find irony in a place that not everyone can see it:) good write

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