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lovely dark and deep

tonight i've made a decision
i miss your hair your touch
these things i'll never get back
yeah they all say to forget
you say it too i try but sometimes
i roll over to the wall pretend
you're there say you're beautiful
& sleep with your ghost in my arms

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On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:

Ah, love it! Yet another piece of proof to back up my decision to fave you and another piece that gets me thinking, "Why the fuck isn't everyone else faving you" -Carl

On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (408) writes:

amazing stuff

On Thursday April 7th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:

sweet -kitty

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Lynaes (1148) writes:

I feel this so deeply.. you have such a perfect way of saying some of the most important things in so few words.. wonderful work. I hope more people come to read your work.

On Sunday January 23rd, 2005, Loneal (118) writes:

You nicely captured the loss ... well done and keep up the good work. ~L

On Monday November 29th, 2004, frozen (756) writes:

very beautiful and heartfilled... i loved it

On Monday November 29th, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:

beautiful. heartrending. concise and perfectly expressed piece - simply wonderful.

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