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in the moment

that's all you're good for now is
smile tongue in mouth
don't talk just touch & later
if there's time we'll reminisce
about days when you
meant something to me.

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On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, squench (7) writes:

i love this poem coz its leaping out to me in flames and leaving me with the winter chills. how i feel for...is what u have sketched in words. thanks!

On Friday November 4th, 2005, xserratedsoulx (272) writes:

that's brutal. ~lauren~

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Lynaes (1109) writes:

I'm sorry I'm going to have to say it again, ouch.. this screams at me. Brutally. perfectly worded..

On Monday November 8th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

shot down is the feeling i get from this one, nice

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

wow...that could move mountains without hands. nice...

On Friday November 26th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:

hah.. this was clever and witty.. i enjoyed the hint of sarcasm that flowed through it.. awsome!

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