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On our patio,
distance means nothing to us
we don't budge an inch.

On our patio,
we don't give a fuck about nothin
but ourselves and each other.

Cigarette smoke acts like a guarding wall
over there, that's the hinterland
to our patio.

On our patio
we are fucking Gods
laughing screaming

We live for our patio
and would die for it too
given the opportunity.

One day the world will be our patio
But for now it's right here so fuck it
give me another square.



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On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, carlosjackal (1647) writes:
Another classic from your great self..clarity, brevity and non-stop poetic punch right up to the very last syllable. -Carl


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, anth (1612) writes:
now this is just utterly superb,i understood every meaning behind it,loved the way you captured it,seriously impressive-faves


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
Realy nice work ... and... thats the hinterland .. *thinks and smiles, then walks in on the patio and moons the crowd* Thats for the hinterland! Bite my hinter ass patio people!!!!!! *running away hiding*



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