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the comedic catastrophe is
she’s constructed a
castle comprised of
counterfeit compassion
casually causing casualties


im convinced
she can’t operate
without hurting someone
I can’t function
without first making sure that she’s watching
I don’t even know what it is

like inspiration
not that she inspires me
but that I only have her at certain times
(although I look for her everywhere)



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On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, carlosjackal (1647) writes:
Have to agree with ol' Solace below...I too am enthralled by your refreshingly unique style. I think we've all known someone like the girl you describe, a girl who allows herself to be a crutch but yet does more damage than good. Fan-bloomin'-tastic!


On Monday January 9th, 2006, AHHH (243) writes:
nice.


On Monday April 4th, 2005, urbanhumility (1348) writes:
i agree with solace.......it brings forth fast intelligence.........well done urban


On Thursday September 16th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
Your style is strange, fresh, something I've not seen in a long while...I'm becoming enthralled by what i see...


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, steuss (145) writes:
WOW! this is GREAT WORK! I really like the alliteration in the first stanza, and the whole poem flows so wonderfully together! MMMM, this is great!


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
wow ~ss



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