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When its our turn

~ Instant Insanity ~

Another Poem I wrote in 2004

Hearts May break
People will stumble
lives May Die
Worlds will crumble

I’ll be left
and you will too
When most die
I'll search for you

cities will burn
countries will fall
we will wait for our turn
and take over them all

We will all be dressed in black
with silk from head to toe
none of us will look back
and when we start to come they will all know


the world will crash down,
over our heads,
no one will be found ,
to save the dead,
but we will be here,
together we blend,
with nothing to fear,
as we walk to the end

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  • bpathos On Friday, October 5, 2007, bpathos (33) wrote:

    This reminds me of "Talk'n World War Three Blues" ... Bob Dylan. I like it.

  • Tania On Friday, April 27, 2007, Tania (235) wrote:

    Very good and yes ill agree its very lyrical.. i think you should come back and post more.. definatly.:))

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, February 26, 2007, DoctorAsh (462) wrote:

    Very nice, an injection of sweet candy tooth flavoring to the gums - this flowed like liquidy hot magma, down into the pride caps that align with the poems walls. Daniel

  • Morbid_insanity On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Morbid_insanity (129) wrote:

    that is really beautiful. Its like a dark love poem. It rhymes but the rhyming works for the poem. It pulls it together and establsihes a nice rythm. Beautiful write ~Josh

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, February 10, 2007, carlosjackal (1803) wrote:

    This is a fine, smooth oldie you've posted..still smells fresh..Write on, Vernon..

  • A former member wrote: Nice write and the rhyme and flow to it was just outstanding. Good write my friend. ~Bry~

  • -Oz- On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, -Oz- (163) wrote:

    decomposition of life, earth, and body.

  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, urbanhumility (1354) wrote:

    brilliant and tasty dark........fluid and well spoken................urban

  • ShardsofSilence On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, ShardsofSilence (270) wrote:

    A very smooth read :) I enjoyed it

  • A former member wrote: There is nothing like being together with someone at the end of every thing. Amazing.

  • A former member wrote: This makes me think of the opoculips the 4 horsemen will ride to our fate to bring us our end.you're words are verry soothing to me. ~Morubiki

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Bella Butchery (949) wrote:

    this would be some badass lyrics... i dont know if you make music, but you should consider it. this makes me think of holding hands at the end of the world, marvelous!


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