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Don't Bother Commenting unless you really read it. This piece holds my heart.
-][ Vernon ][-

I sat on the ocean playing the piano
as if I belonged, Its sad because I know
I don’t, I hear the guitar solo in the background
and as If its real, The music plays together
so beautiful, Oh Times I wished I could just
flow away over this big blue cover, I stood up
as the drums played a soft beat blending
in with soothing sounds of that ghost
guitar. A silent but steady tear fall fast
I dare not wipe it away, For the first time in
my life I felt release of everything,

I dropped to my knees in an ankle deep
of the beautiful waves, Tears fell like
rain drops blending in with the salty water
I throw my hands up plummeting face
first into the ocean praying it will take me
somewhere beautiful, The Waves picked
me up carrying me to the dry sand as if
it where telling me I don't belong there
For the first time I felt comfort, I stood up
and whispered to the sea. "Thank You,
I've never felt so loved" I walked away in
peace. Years later, I can still hear the music
playing as the waves crashed onto land with the sounds,



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On Friday September 28th, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical (160) writes:
i was touched by this piece...yeah i know, and maybe you also know, it's kinda wierd being influenced by stuff...in some cases though i really get into a lunatic phase by the moon...talk about that @_@...very cool write


On Sunday May 27th, 2007, saintedmad (1146) writes:
a rapturous reflection of your own soul poured over and into this write; the deeper wants of LIFE and ART and BEaUTY echo with every tidal wave of emotion. .. . gorgeous; a gentle.man's reverie. . .nessa


On Monday February 26th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
"Times I wished I could just flow away over this big blue cover" beautifully tragic, serene and profound..i found this soothing as well as powerful. excellent write.


On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Kin Hebi (95) writes:
My friend this was written to prefection. Nature and music have such an amazing harmony together. I like this piece. ~Bry~


On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:
The beauty of the world and the sound of art...wonderfully put together.


On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, LOKI (266) writes:
Nice Vernon.Music and the ocean.I saw the ocean for the first time on my last vacation.It captivated me.I wanted to write of its beauty and I couldnt.I was speechless,Damn good write man.LOKI


On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, alaskanamber (129) writes:
infinite wonders. I will never understand her but she knows my heart. ~amber


On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, alaskanamber (129) writes:
I did read it and i felt it. I never feel more peaceful than when standing next to the ocean. there are days when I dream of floating away in her arms, to feel eternally at peace. Yet always I remain in the sand by her side, dreams clouding my mind of her


On Monday January 29th, 2007, Freebird (669) writes:
This was just pure beauty. I enjoyed this very much. Wonderfully done.


On Monday January 29th, 2007, soul dancer (170) writes:
I did read this Vernon - twice. I understand that ache for something and wish for a release as sweet as the one this poem speaks of. A very beautiful write.



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