Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
[Get Full Access & Your Own Profile: Join For Free]
Toward The End Featuring Lady Ragnell And Redneck by Instant Insanity
dark Poetry
dark Poetry

Toward The End Featuring Lady Ragnell And Redneck

~ Instant Insanity ~

Alright Lady Ragnell And I were bored and started playing around with this piece. I got tied up last night and my mind we blank and couldn't finish this so I passed it over to Redneck and He finished this up. I love how it turned out. Its quite brillant.

][ ][
The Day Has Lost its Bliss,
I missed the tragedy,
I ran out in time to see the end,
To See The Whole world in agony,

Lady Ragnell
Children no longer wear smiles in this lonesome world,
Their hopes and dreams destroyed
one blow after another,
bulldozing thoughts like there is no tomorrow
The cruel evil world we now live in
twists fates and steal smiles,
eats hope and dreams as if...
as if it had never eaten,
there's nothing here but pain.

][ ][
No Longer with a conscience,
The children walk the streets at night,
Living up their hopless dream,
with no positive future in sight,

Lady Ragnell
The kids now plunder drugs and guns
shooting others,
hey they just saw it on the news,
death, bloody death shall take them all
they just wanted to speed up the process.

][ ][
These kids, once bright and loving.
now known as the bringers of death,
These Kids, not even in their middle teens,
Are putting our world to eternal rest,

Lady Ragnell
becoming suicide bombers,
not knowing what life means
wanting to end the world, this world
the evil world they live in, for good
not knowing that eternal sleep
is not always as peaceful as it seems.

][ ][
This form of sleep they yurn to live,
is led by misguidence, For Days on end,
they go without a wink, As These nights go
on still with no sleep, The More lives they
take, the more they're awake, They say we'll
when we're dead,

Lady Ragnell
When we're dead and in the grave man
no one will miss us
no one will miss us man
we know it already.

Redneck
that we have always been dead to the world.
with all of your self righteous pride guiding you along.
we sing a song of sweetdreams and goodnight.
until we see each other on the other side of the Dark Path we follow.
they're will be no more tomarrow.

© 2006 Instant_Insanity
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Tags

Comments on "Toward The End Featuring Lady Ragnell And Redneck"

Log in to post comments.
  • Lady Grinning Soul On Monday, November 27, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul (201) wrote:

    i really like how this turned out..... i didnt know it was posted until this afternoon...... ah well

  • A former member wrote: This turned out wonderfully. The three of you make a team to be reckoned with. Hoping to see more of these from you three. Amazing. ~*Beth*~

  • LOKI On Sunday, November 26, 2006, LOKI (170) wrote:

    holy shit this was great.Damn Ilove this poem.An amazing contribution from all of you .Well done.LOKI

  • Fornever_Never On Sunday, November 26, 2006, Fornever_Never (171) wrote:

    This was amazing .. I like the way that you all combined your skills together and redneck the hardest out of all coming in at the end and finishing what other minds started ~T~

  • A former member wrote: Very nice you 3. I loved this one its absolutley brilliant. ~bry~

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, November 26, 2006, carlosjackal (1801) wrote:

    A great threesome effort. Oops! I really must control my stiffies.

  • heartdripsblack On Sunday, November 26, 2006, heartdripsblack (681) wrote:

    this was brilliant. smiles. *cheers*


How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2010 GeniusWeb.com LLC
[Join (free)]    [Poetry Site]    [Read Poems]    [More Poets]    [Terms & Privacy]