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This is to my Family. I miss them all.

Sitting on this phone,
200 miles from home,
Hoping I can feel the emptiness in my soul,
Just called to say I love you,
Doing my best to stay strong
Holding back my tears,
Rewording my feelings in a joke,
I miss you my sister,
Tell the same to dad and mom,
How are the kids?
They’re all getting so old,
Tell them I love them,
And I don’t know when I will come back home,
Tell my brothers I’m finally making it on my own,
Tell the family I am finding myself,
They wouldn’t believe how much I’ve grown,

Worries, Sorrows, Regrets and Happiness in One,
Guess I’m becoming a Man,

Sitting On the phone,
Yes Mom and Dad, I am at home,
Yes ya’ll do fill that emptiness in my soul,
Just called to say I love you all,
I’m finally making it on my own.




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On Friday November 24th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
quite vulnerable and a passage of rites type feel; first I started humming Stevie Wonder and "wondered" where you were going with this....honest,gentle and caring, amen pal....fair play!!


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Morbid_insanity (104) writes:
I sensing some vibes, kinda like your homesick. this is really nice it expresses your feeling so clearly. nice write ~Morbid


On Friday November 24th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
yes definitely - a close family bond is hard to be away from, also signs that he's growing uo too....becoming a better person - respect for that, top bananas Vern...hat tipping/Col.


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Fornever_Never (264) writes:
WOW... that touched me in ways that you wouldnt know ... this is an amazing work ... I think I will read it for a while to come .. and shed a tear each time .. ~T~


On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, The Shattered Heart (66) writes:
Wow...this touched me bad *favorites it* Fits me so well too. Seeing as how most my family is in Michigan and I'm here in Louisiana with plans to move to California within the next several months.


On Monday November 20th, 2006, SaraJane (44) writes:
we all have to do it sooner or later, nice


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, carlosjackal (1615) writes:
This was excellent and heartfelt without being cheesy. Keep up the good work, dude!


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, mozarts cat (271) writes:
emotive and beautiful .. and it shows your strength and heart =]


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, SamoneDrone (410) writes:
aw. this is sad but sings of strength. ....-samone


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1061) writes:
I loved this hun... truly, loved it!!! Julia~


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (347) writes:
Heart-felt. I miss my family and home too :(



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