Thus Dream

As I lay my head down,
I fall through my pillows,
And through my mattress,
And into the world of the enchanted,
Where Friends are lovers,
And ex lovers are dead,
I love this place inside my head,

• On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:
  
  i love poems about dreams, they are my everything
  
  
• On Thursday, January 11, 2007, carlosjackal (1801) wrote:
  
  I enjoyed this especially those first 3 lines.
  
  
• On Wednesday, November 1, 2006, Mistress Shadow (326) wrote:
  
  To the point and charming. ~T
  
  
• On Monday, October 23, 2006, MGood (80) wrote:
  
  I like it just the way it is. It's beautiful.
  
  
• A former member wrote: wonderful...full of emotion...sintalating
  
  
• On Friday, October 20, 2006, urbanhumility (1350) wrote:
  
  your economy of words make the few strong and most meaningful........brilliant............urban
  
  
• On Wednesday, October 18, 2006, Morbid_insanity (127) wrote:
  
  It nicely expressed but does seem a little shortened. But It got your point across nevertheless. I love your name too. ~josh
  
  
• A former member wrote: i like it alot!!! its truthful. you should not change it. ya, it could be used as a chorus, but its really good the way it is. ~Corpse
  
  
• On Wednesday, October 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:
  
  fantastic connection to your write, I wouldn't change it for the world. You created this lovely and you really stole my soul on this piece~Gothic
  
  
• On Wednesday, October 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:
  
  Well dear besides that you spelled "Mattress" wrong I think its fine the way it is. You slip into a subconscious world and you drift into your own imagination you leave the person to go inside there head, giving the reader a