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Thus Dream

As I lay my head down,
I fall through my pillows,
And through my mattress,
And into the world of the enchanted,
Where Friends are lovers,
And ex lovers are dead,
I love this place inside my head,

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On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1170) writes:

i love poems about dreams, they are my everything

On Thursday January 11th, 2007, carlosjackal (1615) writes:

I enjoyed this especially those first 3 lines.

On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, Mistress Shadow (330) writes:

To the point and charming. ~T

On Monday October 23rd, 2006, MGood (79) writes:

I like it just the way it is. It's beautiful.

On Saturday October 21st, 2006, An Expired Member (7) writes:

wonderful...full of emotion...sintalating

On Friday October 20th, 2006, urbanhumility (1317) writes:

your economy of words make the few strong and most meaningful........brilliant............urban

On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, Morbid_insanity (104) writes:

It nicely expressed but does seem a little shortened. But It got your point across nevertheless. I love your name too. ~josh

On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, An Expired Member (20) writes:

i like it alot!!! its truthful. you should not change it. ya, it could be used as a chorus, but its really good the way it is. ~Corpse

On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, The Fool (1048) writes:

fantastic connection to your write, I wouldn't change it for the world. You created this lovely and you really stole my soul on this piece~Gothic

On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, The Fool (1048) writes:

Well dear besides that you spelled "Mattress" wrong I think its fine the way it is. You slip into a subconscious world and you drift into your own imagination you leave the person to go inside there head, giving the reader a

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