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A Poem I wrote to shine on some of my friends on dp by Instant Insanity
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A Poem I wrote to shine on some of my friends on dp

~ Instant Insanity ~

proven
to conquer
at age sixsixnine
Im Relaxing
Basicly
Buying time
Written In Love
Of Suicide_Love
Sent By the Demons
Taking over up above
And Yes, I hear your
voices of Treasion
And No Other then
I turn to but the one
and only
suicideseason
I have other Feelings
None all the same
Like when I chilling
or I fell
too much pain
Dont for get when Im pissed and
who else would I turn to but Vixen
Some Friends through hard
parts in my life
The ones with no
critizing
the ones for whom
I left I lone the
jagged little knife
The are others here, not meaning to boste
I very good friend of mine Opera Ghost
And come on people lets be realilistiq
Who cant love the art work of sexual_sadistic
Great shit from Poetry to grafics
from loved ones to tragic
And If I wanna read poetry with the Art of some beutiful disasters
I love to read the poetry of Axe_Factor
What about that bear wasnt he grands
I guess thats what he gets for drinking my heinikan
But All and all I love the same
IF I could I would remember every one of their poem's topic and name
But I cant cause im fucked up and the head
brains fryed,
and Im probabley better off dead
But I love These excellent poets
Im touched with their writes
And this is my poem to give yall the light







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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, November 18, 2006, carlosjackal (1804) wrote:

    Hey, great tribute to the writers of DP who have truly touched you. I wish you'd post more pieces here on a regular basis, especially ones that speak your heart. Write on, brother..

  • Bakkhus Unbound On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1056) wrote:

    "I turn to but the one and only suicideseason": Good poet. Nice rhyming...I believe they'll all feel your light.

  • A former member wrote: i like this one. it sound like you arent afraid to tell people how you truely feel. i like that.

  • Twilight On Saturday, September 18, 2004, Twilight (1964) wrote:

    boob.

  • sexually_sadistic On Saturday, September 18, 2004, sexually_sadistic (428) wrote:

    awww how nice, my name in a poem. this is really sweet. the way u combined the names really kicks ass. great job. *faves* ~sex~

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, sixsixnine (576) wrote:

    extreamly flattering* i thank u for your support & you bet we've just begun! dp mail me when you get a chance & leave me your digits again take care *669*

  • lollipoplips On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, lollipoplips (103) wrote:

    wer;e no longer gonna' be "more than friends" Remember that.

  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, murder_in_clubland (462) wrote:

    aww how sweet~ss

  • aXe FactoR On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, aXe FactoR (401) wrote:

    thank u vernon, im very honoured, i do not deserve such kindness u have bestowed on me... ur a great person. cant thank u enough.much love, -MeL-

  • suicideseason On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, suicideseason (1920) wrote:

    _this is such a nice gesture...and an interesting concept...i thank you.:)

  • K_Love On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, K_Love (598) wrote:

    Great flow to this, very nice read. Thanks a lot for putting me in there. I liked this. Great job. ~Kirsten~

  • A former member wrote: hey i love this poem i like how you worded ur friends names into it i hope i could be a good writer like you peace holmes

  • glasshouse On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, glasshouse (702) wrote:

    Sweet concept. Your loyalty shines through here. Good piece. -Glass


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