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Its 6:27 and the sun shines gold,
Hovering over the ocean centered
On a bridge, On one side of this bridge
it was dark and the other, glowed the
extravagance of the sun; BEAUTY

     Its 3:24; I’m centered directly in front
     of six perfect triangular-positioned trees,
     Directly in the middle centered the leader
     of the six as if the other five bowed to him;
     As if God directed his sunlight upon this one tree,

Its 1:28 and the desert rose stood firm;
as a gecko craws under for a little shade,
The flower represents brightness along
Everything that’s dead with standing and
sheltering. Yet another cycle for mother nature,

     Its 12:28 in the morning and the world
     Sleeps yet, I lurk around the darkness
     Still trying to find something beautiful
     The greatness of all this worlds beauty
     Focuses on man kind; I hover over my
     Bed looking down, I see beauty; She is Beauty



Secret Message; Sentimental Meaning
Its the Twos






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On Friday February 22nd, 2008, silent circus (399) writes:
ooooooo......thats pretty.... .......wow, its good to see you writeing again lovely


On Wednesday February 20th, 2008, Idle Monkey (18) writes:
Clever idea.


On Wednesday February 20th, 2008, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
beautiful as always. ~ hdb.


On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Ainsof (1747) writes:
This reminds me of the devices of Herbert (or was it Herrick) where the shape of the poem, or in this case, the color, sought to emphasize the message expressed. Never sat well with Dryden, but then, he was a bit crass at times. Very endearing sentiment... I wonder at the choice in color and what it is that red signifies in relation to the golden sun that the imagery seems to champion. Excellent write... check the verb tense in the first two lines of the third stanza. Love the romanticism!


On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
Vern....a coaxing, soothing text....notwithstanding the experiment of the code; I have seen this done before, clever and cute - but I read the actual poem and I really enjoyed the descriptive details of it; the tone and shade, it made me feel so warm - so in some respects you lose Brownie points cos' this is Dark D.A.R.K poetry, you silly boy! How could break into something so pleasant! :P Heh....I jest. And badly at that! Brother Insanity....you have espoused beatific poetics here.....romance and nature wrapped up in delicate harmony....word!


On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
and how do you get the text to work like this, with the stanzas 'pushed in a bit', the spacing? That's how I right many a poem, but I can't figure out how to display it so, unless the format is copied like for like - like it is on AP.....dammingit all to Hell! Can you help?


On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
oops....right/write.....maybe I should quit now?


On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (378) writes:
I've been meaning to try something like this for a while now. You did it rather well, excellent write, *salutes*


On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1862) writes:
II ! yay


On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Army Barbie (501) writes:
This was...beyond beautiful. I almost didn't read it. But I'm glad I did. So lovely...



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