"Welcome Home" by GrandaddyBonegrinder
| DarkPoet |
| Rachel |
| asailorsangel |
| MercyRain |
| manywalks |
| Jonas |
| Litteratus |
| Sharon Rose |
| Deeter |
| Anaelle |
| TropicalSnowstorm |
| cre |
| Lady_Ahz |
| profligez |
| worm |
| Solace |
| MEATGRINDER MAN |
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Welcome Home
Gagging out a greeting, opening the Gate. vomit spittle, dripping from his twisted maw. burning like acid little holes in the stone floor. repulsion at the vision endless-oozing sores cover the Gatekeeper, like a coat of disease morally wounded forever. Disgust gives birth to horror a scream, ensnared by my cobwebbed tongue struggles in silence Feet, and bowels passing through the open Gate, inferno smog, rancid, rages from below seeking Lustfully, brutally invading my guts and brain like a horde of parasites devouring all that is my human disguise. Dark Angel's malignant rebirth, eternal. unholy millions, insane screaming in tormented harmony welcome home, Master, welcome home |
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On Sunday December 10th, 2006, MercyRain (134) writes:
I know the viewpoint's not quite the same, but I can't help but think of 'the Monkey's Paw' while reading this... perhaps the imagery because otherwise 'Heart of Darkness' would seem a better comparison
On Sunday December 10th, 2006, MercyRain (134) writes:
the horror, the horror... that terrible beautiful moment of self-realization, even self-actualization... the masks are stripped, the ego laid bare
On Sunday December 10th, 2006, MercyRain (134) writes:
nothing left but that terrible moment of finally seeing what lies beneath it all... terrible beauty, beautiful terror, the hand that holds the puppet strings is yours all along
On Wednesday February 15th, 2006, MindRape (863) writes:
I always did like your overly graphic but somehow still polite? or gracefull style....u are proof that its how you say it mostly not what you actually said. :D
On Friday April 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:
it was very malicious! i liked it. the use of exotic verbal communication between words is exquisite. You greet the world with manifested truths!
On Saturday October 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:
I believe this Red Carpet belongs under your feet.
On Friday July 11th, 2003, Seraphic (289) writes:
no other poem has created a more vivid picture in my mind...this is dark and a little scary, but I like dark and scary
On Sunday June 1st, 2003, Sharon Rose (666) writes:
I keep coming back to this one, wondering at hidden meanings... I like the new skin...love my new bumper sticker, more, though.... ;)
On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
freekish and truly dark. i love it. It was like poe or old school horror.
On Wednesday January 22nd, 2003, Wester (23) writes:
Dude, you write some really dark shit, and for some reason I can't get enough of it. Keep writing =)
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