"Sunday Morning" by GrandaddyBonegrinder
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Sunday Morning
Crack The Lord knows I hates whipping ya, boy Crack but I done told ya a thousand times Crack ya don’t backtalk your mama Crack Crack but pa, I only .. Crack never mind your lies, boy Crack ya just keep your mouth shut Crack Crack for christ’s sake, pa Crack there ya go blasphemin’ again Crack your soul’s goona burn in eternal hellfire, boy Crack, Crack, Crack, Crack, Crack, Crack Crack now git your worthless ass Crack back in the house Crack and git yourself cleaned up … why … it’s almost time for church .. Grandaddy Bonegrinder |
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On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Ainsof (1866) writes:
hahahaha... this is too nice... no sodomy involved *ooops, did I say that?* heathens!!
On Sunday October 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (55) writes:
damn! i hate people like this... i absolutely hate them. thinking that by going to church you'll redeem yourself and everything will be ok again.
On Friday September 24th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
this was so painful and sad.. very well portrayed...
On Sunday September 19th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
People like the narrator of this poem whom you describe so eloquently should have their asses whipped.
On Friday March 12th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
strong poem.. i've seen many ppl like this. this poem has a sadly strong beat to it all (crack) and the last line is powerful.. sums it all up --
On Saturday December 13th, 2003, unusual_blood (94) writes:
love the repition of the cracks. irony in the end made me think of how contradicting so many ppl can be in life ...
On Thursday November 6th, 2003, WinterGrave (337) writes:
great poem...short and to the point.~~~Grave
On Tuesday September 16th, 2003, Bluegirl (243) writes:
That was very powerful. I love the twist at the end. It really makes you think.
On Wednesday July 30th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
I hate people who spank their children so much. Maybe because i was spanked when i was little. Nice write
On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:
wow...this one hit me hard. i know so many people that claim to be religious but never live their life in a religious manner.
On Wednesday March 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
religion is pointless. its something that is forced upon people who dont believe in it
On Saturday March 15th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
religion is a choice. odds are you even have one. hell, yoga's practically a religion when done right.
On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Sharon Rose (666) writes:
odds are I don't....most have minds too malleable and narrowed to choose when only one choice is presented to them...
On Saturday March 15th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
I have a religion, it's called Jonism. You should all join.
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