"ALIEN ABDUCTION" by GrandaddyBonegrinder
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ALIEN ABDUCTION
Abducted by aliens, my wife and my friend teleportedly taken away and it keeps happening again and again in fact almost every day and when they’re returned by these off-planet freaks after hours and hours of tests my friend is exhausted, all flushed in the cheeks and my wife’s to worn out to have sex But something kept nagging the back of my mind what it was I couldn’t quite tell till a detour brought me an out-worldly find the alien space ship motel Now, your honor I’ve told you time and again the aliens abducted my wife and my friend |
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On Wednesday March 26th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:
Interesting this was, strangely hilarious! Great Write!
On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Err0r (579) writes:
So clever whats left unsaid, but the brain is forced to see. I love it.
On Friday June 2nd, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
This was just delicious, I loved it. The scheme to it just hold some mystery. Aliens are always fun, in this one it made them seem well alien nice write ~nightly
On Monday April 3rd, 2006, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:
Ooops...I missed my commenting last year! Well, no matter. I'm still enjoying this jewel! It was one of the very first poems I read at dp...and it has yet to be topped. :)
On Monday December 12th, 2005, Crimson Shade (115) writes:
Comical... more of joke than a poem... i shall remember this one.
On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Gideon Lost (189) writes:
Nice ending here that pulls the whole piece together and socks it to the reader. Funny too.
On Sunday September 19th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
I like this, because I like to read science fiction. I've posted stuff like this that nobody on DP reads. Your stuff is funny. Mine isn't so funny. Maybe I'm one of these 'aliens' you speak of.
On Monday May 24th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
lol...this cracked me up. its so perfect in terms of rhyming and flow. :)
On Monday May 17th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:
hahaha...I needed a smile and a laugh, and so i came back to this one...and it did the trick.
On Thursday April 29th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
LMAO...Damn...dont know what to say to this...that sucks.. -Morb
On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Necromancer (85) writes:
lovly. that is all to be said. I enjoyed that little twist at the end.~Necro(Justin)
On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:
defenatly a good old blues song, maybe a contry song.. it's a killer..
On Saturday December 13th, 2003, unusual_blood (94) writes:
HAHA! hardy har har ... would actually make a cool song. lalala
On Monday August 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (71) writes:
haha i love it! it has a nice twist to it.
On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:
the twist definately put a smile on my face. awesome.
On Friday July 11th, 2003, Seraphic (290) writes:
well, that twist made me smile, denial in it's most entertaining mask
On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:
I left a comment a long time ago...but It got lost some how. So anyhow...just wanted to say. I still think this is one of the best poems on on dp...it's so fun. ~DW~
On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Sadistic_Plague (11) writes:
nice one, i really enjoyed reading it-cheese lover
On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:
lol.......lol.....lol....i relly enjoyed reading this, keep truckin.
On Saturday March 15th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
great, hilarious. So very original and refreshing.
On Friday February 28th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:
i read this once a few years ago, i didn't get it so much. now with my new adult mind i comprehend (this is all tongue in cheek by the by) and enjoy most thoroughly.
On Wednesday February 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:
That was a very nice twist. I saw it coming (hmm, yes I'll use that phrase*G*). It really paced well and kept the reader going.
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