Eternal Aphrodisia (come away with me)

Take my hand
and join me
in misery's forgotten

spoil with me our youth
on candy coated lies
and fairy tale truths

a clock with bent hands
and crooked numbers
tells us the season we are in

watch, with a tractor lust
as I push these obstructions
out of the way

take my hand, once more
feel what it is like
to be unrestricted

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I lead you through
a stone arch covered
in a creeping ivory

a road laid before us
lined with tulips and daisies
shades never seen before

every where we looked
the land seemed
adorned with willow trees

a spot of sunshine or two
made its way
through the trees

we were greeted with
the sounds of nature
effervescent and serene

the road leads us to
fortification ten fold
glimmering before us

magnificent and bright
vintage abode of the finest
come on, lets throw our troubles behind us

bask in the fountain of youth
wash all our misfortunes away
will you be my forever?

• A former member wrote: inspiring...and beautiful,wish this could be.
  
  
• On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Anth (1437) wrote:
  
  timeless beauty
  
  
• On Friday, November 26, 2004, darkleprechaun (56) wrote:
  
  sounds fun to me ... lol... i am otherwise speachless
  
  
• On Saturday, October 9, 2004, DarkWolf (419) wrote:
  
  Such wonderful imagery.. "will you be my forever?" beautiful line. -michael
  
  
• On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1055) wrote:
  
  'a clock with bent hands and crooked numbers tells us the season we are in' Daliesque and beautifully poetic. 'effervescent and serene' ...
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Twilight (1917) wrote:
  
  wow-i dont even know what to say brandy. this is probably(literally speaking) one of the most flattering things i have ever seen...to think i could inspire this. this is magic. as is your beauty. thank you.
  
  
• On Monday, September 6, 2004, Lynaes (1028) wrote:
  
  This really is breath taking Brandy.. One of your very best I have to say.. it so so beautifully visual, you really took the reader through a paradise.. it reminded me of the secret garden. Wonderful work hon.
  
  
• On Monday, September 6, 2004, Dayer (180) wrote:
  
  damn, I am speechless
  
  
• On Monday, September 6, 2004, Anth (1437) wrote:
  
  sigh,im speechless,breathtaking work
  
  
• On Sunday, September 5, 2004, NikesRain (1215) wrote:
  
  little sister you have an amazing mind. This is as bright your smile and almost as beautiful as you are ;) Who could resist the world you paint with these words? Wonderful work.
  
  
• On Sunday, September 5, 2004, Evil (425) wrote:
  
  this made me smile. it just gave me that mental picture, like alice in wonderland. i wish i were there. this was wonderful. i liked it a lot. nicely done, lovely. =)