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I wish I could be here today
to feel the sun's warmth upon my face
and to feel the cool breeze
gently gliding through my hair
the butterflies flutter past
chasing each other


Was I wrong to let you go?

You wanted your freedom
You said you wanted to feel
what it was like to spread your wings
and fly through the world
with no strings attached

I let you fly free
choose freedom over me
leave me to my bitter misery

Please leave me be
and let me just bleed





bleed









b l e e d








b . l . e . e . d
my sorrows away



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On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
extremely sad & painful but a masterpiece at the same time


On Sunday September 5th, 2004, Evil (542) writes:
again, you paint a beautiful image in my mind. i really have no words to do anything you write justice. but you are beautiful. nice work.


On Saturday September 4th, 2004, Choronzon (235) writes:
Painful. Hope you feel better. Wonderful write, my friend. Cool ending.


On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, sixsixnine (496) writes:
very nice.. i like how this feels .. just let the blood spill.. *669*


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
This is conflicting...Very conflicting...Both views are pain causing...I dont know...


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:
Such a sorrowfull end. Such a beautiful work. -Michael


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
so saddening,and powerfully written, an incredible work


On Monday August 30th, 2004, Deliverence (799) writes:
Such a sacrifice..but nobler of you to have done so..-Kefkism


On Monday August 30th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
this is brutally saddening. im so sorry these thoughts even passed through your mind. good stuff though brandy, wow.



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