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Tattered Hope in a Cracked Sky

Look at me
I am the perfect
image of depravity
tattered blonde hair
and empty slate eyes
only gives a glimpse
into the unkown
beyond my reality
a fragile porcelain doll
that would crack at
the slightest touch

-Don't leave me-
It's so cold in here

A think tank filled with
so many thoughts of
yesterday::today::tomorrow
the flashing of warning
signs beckoning for me
to stay away

I doubt myself everyday
'Am I really going to succeed?'
'Do I really know what I am doing?'

Sanity is a tear drop away
and ironically enough, I am all dried out

Why must someone be so ashamed of who they are and how they think?

Why must I be so ashamed of being alive?

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On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Enigma (126) writes:

Nice, I liked it alot...I feel like that sometimes to...great work.

On Sunday September 5th, 2004, Evil (544) writes:

this was mind wrenching. gorgiously done.

On Tuesday August 24th, 2004, Deliverence (799) writes:

Why is that so? I wonder that as well..-Kefkism

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

the ending really brought this piece together...

On Saturday August 14th, 2004, Twilight (2099) writes:

this was a blow of my stomach. it had an affect on me. took its toll on my insides and ripped me apart. this was a great piece. the portrait of you-from the inside.

On Monday August 9th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:

Differing perspectives often annoy me, but they are necessary, I look at you and see a perfect image of beauty...but who am I to judge...

On Monday August 9th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:

If it's worth anything at all to you, then I am proud of you and all you have achieved and will yet achieve, for without your past we would not have met and that indeed would have been a shame...

On Monday August 9th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:

Does anyone know what they are doing? Really? I know I don't, lost in a sea of faces and expectations I never sought...I am ashamed of me in certain ways, but there is always something to be proud of, even if it isn't you...

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

a wound pouring with honesty. And I would be a liar if I said that I have never felt this way. Great stuff. :::OLd

On Saturday July 31st, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:

Oh honey.. I have to fully agree with anth.. this is amazing work, but you are beautifuls. *hugs tight*

On Saturday July 31st, 2004, Northstar (454) writes:

what you are expressing here is an agonizing turmoil of the soul that i completely relate to and battle with continuously--masterfully done

On Saturday July 31st, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

sigh this near made me cry,so much of your soul you poured into this,written so perfectly,strange how you could see yourself sometimes and how I see you,your mirror decieves you tho,sigh...faves this,ibut in its beauty I found it painful to read

On Friday July 30th, 2004, Lydia Jade (789) writes:

fuck that was awsome....i never tire of your writting....i commend you....pricless work...so honest and true

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