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I got a glimpse of joy today
and warmed my smile beyond credence
to be tricked into an illusion so
real, and tangible is phenomenal
day dreams become reality and
nightmares a figment of my canny ingenuity
s-l-o-w-l-y v.a.n.i.s.h.i.n.g
without a trace

I touched the sky today and
it made me feel renewed and
luminous, like floating through air
weightless and as light as a
feather, hypnotizing and enticing
reaching up into water in lieu
of nether lesser, a fairy tale come true

I met a boy today who
lit up my world and showed
me things I could only muse of
he grabbed my hand and
taught me to fly, to let go
of my fears and doubts and be
free, free as a bird with no
chance of receiving clipped wings

Today I attended a funeral to say
goodbye to my only best friend



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On Thursday July 22nd, 2004, Ravenblade (274) writes:
very sad twisvt thrown in at the end, but still great write nonetheless...I'm still in awe by your expansive use of the english language...>Raven<


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
The last two lines were gutting and devastating, so sad.. I loved the second stanza, gorgeous imagery. Eloquent work Morb. ~L


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Midnight Shadow (90) writes:
Awwww...the ending is so sad. Somehow, it fits with the poem, but then again, it doesn't. *shrugs* Loved it, unique. ~MS~


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
i actually found this to be so positive , i love the elation of the words and the nature of the flow here,i really enjoyed this work


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Brenya Rose (190) writes:
The end kind of killed the lovely euphoric feeling I was getting from this, but it was still wonderful


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Choronzon (235) writes:
Shit dude, all high and happy and then like a bird shot down. Depressing at the end but very enjoyable.



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