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Help Denied

A helping hand * presented

taken * with greed and deceit

over and over * taken * mistreated

misused * abused and beaten to the floor

These two hands wrap their
slender fingers around your neck

Can you feel the hatred burning inside?

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On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

short but powerful, i like the contrasting image of the kind of bite the hand that feeds you or the giving hand can take all back am i making sense lol?, its another great work from you

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, Liath (41) writes:

<---Lost...lol.

On Thursday May 20th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

Lost?

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

I really liekt his..its interesting and random i hope to read more of your works sopoon~ss

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, sixsixnine (492) writes:

liked this piece it it's short but thought provocative* great work*669*

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, Drifter (364) writes:

The only excuse for betrayal is love - the only result hatred. Powerful work.

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