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"Cornfield Effect" by Mistress Morbid

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And there I stood in the middle
of a cornfield, not knowing how
I arrived to this point of confusion
but sure enough staring right at it

I take off, running frantically
thrashing the corn out of the way
as I barrel through the stalks
panting, heart racing like a horse

I am lost, I look around in a daze
everything looks the same
haven't I been here before?
I pick a direction and run

Again I am waving my arms
pushing the corn stalks out
of my way, leaving a dust veil behind
running out of breath

Just before all of this I
was running around in here
giggling and screaming in joy
not a care in the world, just having fun

Funny how things change quickly
for the worse, and least pleasant
feeling a bit dazed and confused
disoriented, and full of doubt

Thrashing through the corn I did go
my arms wildly whacking the stalk aside
looking around hoping to find the way
the way out of this nightmare

I stumble cross a scarecrow
I look up at the tall stuffed dummy
dark were its features and scary
was is its purpose, screams could be heard

Turning to run the other direction
I stop, turnaround, and stare at it
not so scary after all, besides it
is a stuffed piece of cloth sewn together

I walk up to it and look up
no, you don't scare me at all
and content with the discovery I made
I start to climb the wooden pole holding it

Finally reaching the top, seeing beyond
beyond the corn stalks and to the barn
bright as day, did that house shine with pride
I climb down and dart for that direction

Reaching the corn's edge and just
to the side of the dirt road
I turn around and stare at the crop
Oh how mysterious and suspenseful

Standing, thinking for a moment
lost in a daydream of adventure
I run back into the field, thrashing
to once again feel the cornfield effect




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On Sunday January 20th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:
That was amazing! Fear, recovery and then return was subjective here, that love of being afraid, the thrill of what if, always a good twist! This is unmatched! Perfect!


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, anth (1612) writes:
so compelling and brilliant in its imagery metaphor, as if trapped in a maze of life, but so vivid this was the images really come alive ,a gripping imaginative write


On Saturday May 15th, 2004, evolve (2231) writes:
Cornfields are fun, as was this piece...it engulfed me...quite suspenseful.


On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, sixsixnine (490) writes:
korn*yeah! i liked it* very cool*669*


On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
This scared me...dont ask me why or how, it made me feel odd...thats what i took from this...strange...


On Thursday April 29th, 2004, DoctorAsh (507) writes:
wow .. ::::buys a round of beers for everyone in the house::::: this is awsome shizz taint. This one truely stands out from the rest .. clearly. Excellent [D&A]


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, worm (131) writes:
this reminded me of "jeepers creepers"... the movie... damn! someone should have popped some of that corn! LOL... an entertaining read! thanks!


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
At school...sitting in english class...I realized that the second jeepers creepers happened to have a scene from the corn field, but this came from me playing in the corn as a kid at my grandmother's house in Illinois.


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, Stranger (281) writes:
This was wonderfully done. I was completely drawn into the page while reading this. The confusion, the angst, the emotions were all palpable.


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
What a fun scamper through the stalks. How interesting our minds... can turn nature's field into a haunted house of sorts then back again. Great work! :::OLd


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:
I could hear the stalks rustling behind me as I read this, what a romp. You breathed true life into this, wonderful. ~ wen


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Wow, this was so, so vivid. I could the whole thing in my mind's eye. The constant cycle of confusion, feeling lost and facing your fears only to delve back into the trap again. stunning and emotive, Morb, I love it. -L


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:
_um...i'm sorry...i can assure you that i will comment on this actual piece at a later point in time...but...i love your profile picture...you look like an evil charlies angels type ass kicker.awesme.i will be back.;)tim


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:
ok...i'm back...this is stunning in all of it's imagery.i was with you the entire way.and what a trip...just incredible.i really enjoyed this.well done.-tim



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