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"Ashy existence of a poor man" by Mistress Morbid

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Thump thump thump
of your heartbeat
sends chills down my spine
as we lay here
chassis intertwined
I muse the wonders
wonders of you
wonders of us





















A needle prick and flash
the facade of perfect
..v.a.n.i.s.h.e.s..
not two
but more
of us now lay here
hearing his heartbeat
no, his heart is laughing
at us
pointing and mocking




Pulling the mask away
I stab ferociously
at his satirical onyx heart
scarlet flows like a stream
down his soul
through his mane
around my feet and legs
and straight to my hands
I bask in your sanguine pond
of rigid {dreams} lies

















I wouldn't hurt a fly,
would I......?



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On Saturday May 15th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:
Would you? This is exquisite...I love the second stanze the best...it made the poem come alive.


On Monday May 10th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
Wow, great setup and delivery. It leaves me feeling a tad bit insecure.


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...exceptionally written...as twisted as it is, I enjoyed it...oh yeah, I only like twisted stuff...thanks for reminding me...you can take that knife out of my arm now...thank you... -Darun


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...you, hurt a fly...? nah, you have more interesting things to maim...why waste it on a fly...? lol


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
Lol, the whole point is to provoke thought....


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, hopeless (62) writes:
oh my..... i cant use big words to describe this piece and the rest of your work like everyone else.... but all i can say is that this was scary and truly amazing.... ~hopeless


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
you grow and grow within your poetic prowess. youll be bigger then dp one day. youll have better things...and dp will remember you for it.


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Exodus (211) writes:
wow.....the colors did wonderous things to your words....very nice....i like alot..


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
wow - the change in emotion through each of the stanzas is excellently achieved; the use of the colour making it even more so. fine work indeed. :)


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
This essence of love, rotted and poisoned, like that well known faery tale snow white...the apple is a perfect depiction...Hurt, stab, cull the infedelity from this world...This place needs far more truth, honor and trust...


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
"Chassis" that is the crux of this for me, the comparing of humans to machinery...Epitomises this world...To rut like rabbits facelessly, to eat and plunder...humanity...


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:
Well, drop my drawers. Damn lady type person, this was absolutely perfect. Distrubing and utterly delicious. ~ mw


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
You seem to keep dropping your drawers...need help with them? lol


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
Deliciously disturbing indeed. Try having an ice cream sandwhich instead, they're tasty:) This was scary-great. ~Ryan


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
So deliciously disturbing! Rich with surrealism, I love the way your work always paints such stiking images! amazing work Morb, really astounding :) -L



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