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"Just Behind the Sun (Blackened Shades of Grey)" by Mistress Morbid

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A butterfly flaps
irregular beats
drunken off of pollen
its wings torn
halfway off its body

Flutters rapidly
as fast as it can
in hopes the giant
will not grab it
and rip the rest
of its wings off

Staggering to stay
afloat the gusting wind
and far away enough
from the giggling giant

For the butterfly
has no where to hide
slowly drifting lower and lower
the butterfly glides into
water and is suddenly submerged
into the shiny depths
of a swiftly running lake

Sadly enough
the little child that
had torn the poor
butterfly's wings off
followed and fell into
the water as well

only to see that child
doesn't know how to swim




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On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:
Karma...


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
Very ironic.


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
wo i liked this one-alot. deep and without one loss of thought. kept me holding on. waiting line by line. the finish was heartwrenching.


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:
Slid into my stomach and balled there. Painful reality. Beautifully sculpted. ~ mw


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Six-Out (1827) writes:
Ironic. Both now gone, such a sad state it is.


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Lynaes (1128) writes:
Such a sad and tragic story, but heart wrenchingly beautiful, I could see it play out in my mind's eye. This sent shivers down my spine! Amazing write Morb I absolutely love it! -L


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
i agree completely... this was absolutely visual... the butterfly's desperate attempt at escape was so movingly written... great work.


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (318) writes:
this is quite interesting...i like the change-up at the end...that brings it closer to home for most. great write. ///Jedi\\\


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
hmmm, this is very interesting .. i love your idea here, the perception behind the story. good write, awsome title. [D&A]


On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
it gave me the shivers ~slave



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