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Goodbye (Two)

I push you into the water
and the chains around your helpless body
rapidly sinks you to the bottom of the lake where
you wrestle and turn drowning the last breath you will take.
I stand there and watch you struggle in agony but numb I will be.

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On Monday April 19th, 2004, SilentStalker (1324) writes:

...hmmm, yes, drowning is always fun...not too much needed in the effort section...just watch and wave...watch and wave...lol -Darun

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Very striking and effective, makes you shiver! Awesome work, very powerful. :) ~L

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

nicely written.i too can feel this one.lmao not at you but it reminds me of that partnership for a drug free america comercial where that girls friend is drowning.anyway****.knight

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

LMAO, I just now realized that this does seem just like that commercial.

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

wow...i can feel this one. especially right now. i know the feeling and i would kill to kill it. get it? got it? sweet...

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

wow, i really liked this, really cant think of anything smart to say though, great read.~~~Grave

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