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Body Rot

Beauty
F
.
O
.
R
.
E
.
V
.
E
.
R

Swirls of
Blue, Purple, & Red
The color of my love
For you
BrUiSeD & ReFuSeD

Taken InDuLgEd

F.e.e.d
my -fuel-
my -fire-
Flares with
AnGeR
aNgUiSh

Make it *STOP*
Turn it *OFF*
*KILL* the pain

S.T.A.I.N.S
Of crimson b~l~o~o~d
Wont *go away*
*Wash* away

S.T.A.L.E
B.I.T.T.E.R.
& O.L.D
Shrivled into `n`o`t`h`i`n`g`

My FaCaDe may
Be forever
*cracked*
&
*faded*

But
My !.inner beauty.!
Will always *Shine* so bright

With
s
.
p
.
e
.
c
.
k
.
s
Of S.O.R.R.O.W
To *help* me through

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On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, Darkest_Addiction (54) writes:

i really like the WAY this is written

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, SorrowSoul (73) writes:

Beautiful work. Aside from this being a great write, the style of the wording really accents this poem.

On Friday April 16th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

alot of syblos, they spoke what you were trying to convey and they definately made it look cool. it was making me nauseous but in a good way:)

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:

To remove myself from the banality of my own current sickness that renders my words a shallow form from what relevence they used to have...Until this sickness eases, I am wordless and humbled...

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:

Timidly wandering through your words of dismay and yet hope a swirling paradox within itself. I am rendered breathless, numb, anaesthetised by them unable to convey, express response

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

thanks, means alot. =)

On Monday April 5th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

normally I find uneven cases and gliphs ristracting... but not in this one. You've managed to really use them effectively. BRavo - great stuff. Fox

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:

Had to come back and read this again, just to get the fuller effect. Delicious. ~ mw

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:

lovely visual emphasis; added extra action and evocation... I agree with Lynaes. great work. :)

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

yesss....very...trippy...i like...i was really hooked, charming...

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

_cool...my head is spinning...breath taking.-tim

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:

Oh wow, this was very trippy, I enjoyed the way you've portrayed this.. The image I get from this is sad until "But My !.inner beauty.! Will always *Shine* so bright" gave it an uplifting twist of hope. Amazing work Morb. ~L

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, riCOCKulous (36) writes:

its so... pretty *is amused* ~Noki

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

i love it i like the words you used and of course how could i not mention the expectacular (misspell i know) format sweeeet!!!! lol i love this i just do... srry for the mispells here and there its late im tired. ~darlin :)

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

Quite alright =)

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:

This was dizzying though I'm sure the situation was as well. I think the format on this added something to it, helped the words to drive their point. Wonderfully done:) ~Ryan

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Six-Out (1823) writes:

Trippy...had me staggering to keep my footing the entire way through. Enchanting write.

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