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Nothing

There is no sense in leaving
and no sense in staying
There is no sense in coming back
*
There is nothing left
For me now
Nothing here at all
Lots of empty space
No where left to fall
Not a shoulder to cry on
A shirt so soaking wet
Just my two hands
And a box of klenex
*
Oh how I wish I could tell you
How truly sorry I am
For putting false hopes
Where there was naught
For my world is falling apart
And my heart has been shot

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On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:

You're good at this saddness melancholy-type poetry. Always give the heart a good pull with the emotion.-Kefkism

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

seriously...false hopes can kill a person. they can bing you the the highest extremeties. and drop you straight into hell. with just one glance...your in ruin. well done.

On Friday May 28th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

similar to a drug...euphoria suddenly replaced with reality, nausea and one nasty headache. however it's when we no longer allow ourselves to get our hopes up that's the worst...

On Friday May 28th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

constantly living in negativity...shattering others' hopes as well...sometimes unawares sometimes for fun. i know the feeling of believing in false hope and becoming gravely disappointed and....

On Friday May 28th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

i also know the feeling of living in constant negativity. though hoping and believing that something might happen can eventually leave me shattered..at least i believed in something..at least i could wear a smile..

On Friday May 28th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

i hope things have gotten better for you. ///Jedi\\\

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

Wow, the first stanza hit me hard. I know that feeling all too well. *hugs* A sad, beautiful write.. Just wanted to let I'm here for you. :) ~L

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:

_god damn...so much regret,so much sorrow...i know this feeling...and it's no fucking picnic.far from it.this was so powerful and equally sad.-tim

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

And here I sit still killing myself over and over, for all the false hopes... I thank you. =)

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Jane (59) writes:

"Lots of empty space, nowhere left to fall..." Beautiful...

On Friday March 19th, 2004, Six-Out (1799) writes:

Sometimes false hopes are all we have to run on. They get you through the day....but they make you feel like shit afterwards, eh? Stunning write.

On Friday March 19th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

In a flash of a moment I open my eyes and nothing is there, nothing at all just completly bare.

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