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I bid you adieu

Everything I hold near to my heart
Are all falling apart
Everyone is fading away
Leaving me to my own solitude
My walls are crumbling down
And revealing all my deepest
Thoughts...
Secrets...
So vulnerable
So cold
Sends me into an
Uncontrollable quiver
HELP
Can anyone hear me?
No
Of course not
A tear drop forms at the
Corner of my eye
Slowly slipping down my cheek
Like the hot flow of blood
Pumping through my veins
A hand gently wipes the tears away
And embraces me tightly
His touch warm as the sun during a hot spring day
His essence blinding
And smell overwhelming
He takes my bag of burdens
And throws it over his shoulder
He grasps my hand and leads me
To heaven

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On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (741) writes:

great poem

On Monday August 30th, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:

Hmm...a savior of your own..always nice to have..-Kefkism

On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

It's interesting i'm not one for "heaven" and such but still a good write ~slave

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Liath (41) writes:

Very interesting. I didn't really expect the going to heaven part though, but a nice twist there at the end. I enjoy your material, Morbid. =)

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

WOW this is something i really really enjoyed reading as to it brought tears to my eyes its very nice and deep i love the endin really bright i like the way you layed everything out LOVE IT!

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

wowww! ending! i adore the progression... the start... such an intense feeling.. the words flowed down the page... the feeling with them, than... that change. very touching. something here i can't put into words, wonderful piece i like it a lot.

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

you know... its like that last part flowed in like a summer breeze.. and changed the whole tone and colour of the movie like a new lense, or a film from a different era. love how that happened... awsome stuff.

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

::hugs:: Thank you, that warm breeze sure did save my sanity. =)

On Monday March 8th, 2004, Stranger (297) writes:

This is definitely one of my favorites from you. The ending is very powerful.

On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

It makes me very happy everytime I read it. Thank you, the ending is what I worked hard on.

On Sunday March 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

thats really good. i exspecially liked the title.andria

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Six-Out (1799) writes:

I don't know, but I saw it as the pain was a lot, and God took your hand and led you to heaven after your death. Either way, nicely done.

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