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Tranquil Skys

Unicorns dancing in the moonlight
Their horns kissing the sky
The faeries sit on leaves of trees
Telling idle tales to one another
Everything shimmers in the
Light of the moon
Making everything look
Like a lost enchanting palace
The elvish nation in a deep slumber
Looks so peaceful

Oh how I wish I could join them

Suddenly white glistening
Snow flakes float through the air
Slowly descending to the ground

Then I set the snow globe down

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On Monday August 30th, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:

Beautiful fantasy here..Unicorns..and fairys, and umm dwarves..-Kefkism

On Thursday May 20th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

your poems are always so beautiful and each time the ending just puts it into another perspective,stunning

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Solace (1401) writes:

Often have i dreamed of being taken away into the realms of the danaan, the faery folk...My dream is one in which we no longer need to dream of a perfect place for we are already there...I would go on but too much to say in such small space :)

On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

Such a lovely description of the scene, created some beautiful images. And what a pretty ending! Stunning writing. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Thank you, I had a snow globe in mind because its something you can touch, and then dream on about.

On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Stranger (297) writes:

Vividly it flows from colorful fantasy to hardened reality. Like the sadness of waking from a dream that you wish had been real.

On Sunday March 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

amazing, so tranquil, i can see it being painted before my very eyes. andria

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Im amazed by your comments, thank you so much.

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

My god this is so beautiful! And what a gorgeous twist, I love this piece. Excellent work. ~L

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, hopeless (61) writes:

awwww that was cool..... nice grab back to reality.. it was so vivid... i really enjoyed this piece... ~hopeless

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