DarkPoetry -|- Mistress Morbid -|- Goodbye

I envision you hanging
pleading for help
but all I do is shake my head
and watch as the life is throttled out of you.

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On Tuesday December 21st, 2004, indefined (679) writes:

Few words, but the image of the dying man, rivulets of blood running from his boots while a shrouded woman silently watches, is interesting. I'd like to see a portrait of the scene.

On Sunday August 29th, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:

Hahah, all you do is watch? Sinister indeed..-Kefkism

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, sixsixnine (560) writes:

BRUTAL beauty* liking this piece a whole lot *669*

On Monday April 19th, 2004, SilentStalker (1316) writes:

...this speaks vengeance in the fewest amount of words...powerful without saying much, and that is its appeal...nice...I like the visions of rage I see from this...you may have stirred an idea...lol -Darun

On Monday April 19th, 2004, SilentStalker (1316) writes:

...don't you love it when someone's comment is longer than your work...? never figured out how people could do that...lol

On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

wow what can i really say to this.it's been cleared up by every comment you currently have.i enjoyed.knight

On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:

Short and sweet, to the point...

On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

Very quick indeed. I think many of us have had this flash of emotion at one time or another. I like how the single thought is given just enough character.

On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

It was never intially finished, but then I realized it didnt need anything else.

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, suicideseason (2103) writes:

_25 words,boys and girls...this is minimalism as it was meant to be...this was fucking powerful.and intense and kinda twisted...which i like.25 words,boys and girls...wow.-tim

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Thanks alot, sure did get out what I was daydreaming.

On Monday March 1st, 2004, Stranger (297) writes:

Loved this. Talk about "to the point".

On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Thank you, I felt no need to add to it.

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