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Mom

I wrote a poem, Mom,
it’s about you.
I hurt inside, Mom.
I need you!
I cried last night, Mom.
I called for you.
As I grow older
I sometimes wonder…
Will you be here,

When my dreams come true?

I held my child, Mom,
In her I see you.
I look at the moon, Mom.
I think of you.
In the mirror, Mom,
I get a glimpse of you.
As I grow older
I sometimes wonder…
Will you be here

When my dreams come true?

The days pass, Mom.
I long for you.
My child has left, Mom.
Can I talk to you?
I’m so sad, Mom,
Why are you?
As I grow older
I sometimes wonder…
Will you be here
When my dreams come true?

Alone again, Mom,
though not by choice.
As I sit in dark, Mom,
I hear your voice.
The doorbell rings, Mom
My dream has come true..
I look over my shoulder,

And it ‘s really you!

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On Saturday March 18th, 2006, vaultgrl (233) writes:

this is beautiful......and powerful, i really like this, i really hope you can have this.....

On Friday June 17th, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:

i love mom poems... to get complete, connected, and together with one's mom is the most powerful thing one can do... i wish you love, peace, and happiness with your mom... 1, Seth

On Friday June 17th, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:

even if it takes a lot of work and time it can be so worth it.

On Wednesday June 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (2) writes:

So Powerful yet sad but pleaseing!

On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, PoeticMindBlow (24) writes:

awwh

On Monday June 6th, 2005, Serenity (578) writes:

I'd be lost without my mother. This is so sweet and truly amazing.

On Monday June 6th, 2005, Sentient Ignorance (35) writes:

This poem is beautiful in its pain. My mother abandoned me when i was 12 to live on my own. The ending is a masterpiece wrenchin my heart to new heights.

On Saturday June 4th, 2005, Roadkill (37) writes:

I can relate to this I lost my mother to cancer 11 years ago Not only did I lose mom but I lost mt best freind in life ....Lovely work and it's not too sweet for us to comment on :)

On Wednesday May 18th, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:

Thank you ladies. Do you think this is too sweet for the men to comment on?

On Wednesday May 18th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (755) writes:

So sweet... Great write ~*~tart~*~

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, your_only_love (163) writes:

this kinda made me upset 'cause I live across the country from my mother and we rarely ever talk, even though she's crazy and never could raise me I still love her and she's still great

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, your_only_love (163) writes:

um... yeah... but the point is, I'm glad to hear something like this instead of that hatred I'm always reading

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, Trapped_with_Insanity (128) writes:

Yeah...~Diviana

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, Trapped_with_Insanity (128) writes:

I mean that in a good way!!!~D

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, Mahakala (255) writes:

Wow, great poem, I like it. I think alot of us feel that way you know.

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Sometimes that's really how people feel when they grow older... nice perspective and great rhyming without being annoying or cheesy; Awesome

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