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HE STILL SINGS

IN A BRIEF MOMENT,
STRANGE,
HOW THE WORLD UFOLDS,
CHANGE,
IT'S MYSTERY HIDES,
TRUTH.
TO THOSE WHO SEEK
YOUTH.
A MOMENT OR A BREATH,
LONG,
LIVES OF THE LOVING,
GONE.
JOY, AND LOVE,
A GIFT BRINGS,
IN MY HEART,
"HE STILLS SINGS"

DEDICATED TO THE MAN THAT MADE ME,
NOW...
MY,
"GUARDIAN ANGEL"

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On Wednesday April 5th, 2006, Thorn (432) writes:

ow... the poem wasn't bad, but all these caps made my eyes hurt.

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (53) writes:

DIS PIECE IZ HOT AZZ DA STOVE ON, IT'S MADD DEEP N YES DIS IZ g=CAPS OUT OF SPITE TURN DA CONTRAST N BRYTNESS UOF LIL PUSSY'Z-PERSEVERANCE-

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (53) writes:

man people always, always say some stupid shit "Ohh the caps my eyes" fist up PANTHER fuck deez dickheadz blind'em fawkerzzz SHOUT OUT 2 MONKEY!-PERSEVERANCE-

On Sunday September 19th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

Shane is right (as always) the caps have a purpose and belong to the peom just as much as the words. Wonderful...if only I know he who stills sings. Keep it dark. -Munkey-

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:

Thanks Shane.

On Wednesday August 18th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Caps or no caps? You decide. Is your capitalization indicative of the title? I don't think your readers thought of this. Or did they? A soul is still a soul. It doesn't matter if the soul screams, sings, or shouts, as long as it communicates.~Shane~

On Sunday August 8th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

love the piece but the capitals are a little hard on the eyes. makes it harder to enjoy the piece.

On Friday July 30th, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:

This is very inspiring... a brillant play of words. Bethany

On Sunday June 6th, 2004, Griffin (134) writes:

i enjoyed it, but capitols annoy me, keep writing

On Friday June 25th, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:

thank you for your comment, i will read your works. thank you

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

capitals take the edge off a poem. sounds like your screaming everything. and also. if that is the what you are going for-cool. but some people might not like it.

On Monday March 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

I find it inspiring and thoughtful to your guardian angel. I actually like the capitalize because its different. oh, thank you for your comment on my poem.

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:

I DON'T HAVE WORDS LIKE FUCK YOU IN MY TITLES,SO I GUESS I WON'T BE READ.

On Sunday September 19th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

DO what you DO ONE it's great and I liked it!! CAPS!!!! -Munkey-

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Alanarchy (1698) writes:

MIGHT HELP IF YOU DIDN'T CAPITALIZE EVERYTNING. THAT'S JUST AN IDEA...seriously dude.

On Sunday September 19th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

CAPS CAPS BE AFRIAD OF MY CAPS EVEN IF THEY HAVE A PURPOSE THAT YOU ARE TO STUPID TO UNDERSTAND!!!!!!!!!BOO!!!! THERES MORE CAPS!!!!! -Munkey-

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, SilentStalker (1316) writes:

...yOU KnoW, juST LiKe wHEn pOEpLe Do ThiS, iT gETs BotHErSoMe...WeLl, ManY Of uS Do NOt AppReCiAtE AlL ThoSE CapItAlS...ThaNK yOu...

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

LMAO...sorry...lmao.

On Saturday April 10th, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:

Hey Jedi_MindFuck!! What did you mean by, LMAO...sorry...Imao

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, SilentStalker (1316) writes:

...had to do it...*throws out his 'asshole' card*...okay, I'm done...Really, though...the yelling on top of the rude comments on my buddies will get one nowhere, but there's still room in my heart for ya, buddy...

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Like I had said before, capitols take away from the whole purpose. If you had more of an optimistic approach on things, you will be heard. You are a great writer, dont let your doubts kill that. -Morb

On Thursday April 1st, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:

How can just capitalizing,ruin a poem? I am not being facetious, I just need to know.

On Thursday April 1st, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

All captials are actually harder on the eye, which makes it a little more difficult to read... it also reads like the poem is 'shouted'. The same with emails... hope this helps. Fox

On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Kinda gives you that wincing feeling, aching to the eyes and ears. Sometimes caps are good, just not the whole thing.

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