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"The Flower" by Lady_Ahz

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A pale flower grows by a wall,
Rarely touched by the sun at all.
Growing where no flower should be,
Growing where no one can see,
The delicate petals fall.

Then by chance a ray of light,
Came to brighten the flower's night.
The flower thrived under loving care,
The flower colored and grew quite fair,
It was quite a lovely sight.

The flower loved the light so much,
It's petals quivered at it's light touch.
It felt safe while the light was near,
Knowing there was nothing to fear,
And time went on as such.

Until, unfortunately, came the day,
When the light had to go away.
To leave the flower back in the gloom,
Just as the flower had become full bloom,
Under the influence of the light's soft sway.

With the light gone the flower soon failed,
Losing it's petals, again it paled.
Loosing it's strength, it began to fall,
Falling limply there, by the wall,
Where once, in the wind, it had sailed.

Laying there, thinking of the light,
The flower soon gave up the fight.
It surrendered itself back to the ground,
To let the weeds and grass and bugs surround.
Of the flower now, there is no sight.



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On Sunday July 20th, 2008, rage_addict (18) writes:
omg! this is so beautiful...it blew me away!!...god i love this...it's so awesome


On Friday November 16th, 2007, fallen (297) writes:
Such a petal-fall wonder, teary eyes kiss your dreams.


On Saturday October 6th, 2007, Bridge (354) writes:
i've read this one before, and i believe that i did indeed like it, but i suppose that i didn'tk now how to comment. but now, in a way, i can't agree with the message.


On Saturday October 6th, 2007, Bridge (354) writes:
in the way that, i don't want to depend on someone/something and then have them leave and be left alone to rot. lately, i just want to believe in myself and know that that's all i need.


On Sunday March 4th, 2007, ShardsofSilence (332) writes:
I absolutely love this. I'm too awestruck to say anything. I'll come back later and leave a better comment..


On Sunday March 4th, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:
that was amazing, wonderful flow. the meaning behind it is just wow. great job


On Wednesday November 15th, 2006, darth ren (40) writes:
amazing


On Tuesday November 7th, 2006, darth ren (40) writes:
amazing, simply amazing. great flow, painted such a vivid picture and really captures the emotion of loss on every level


On Sunday October 29th, 2006, An Expired Member (130) writes:
Oh this was breathtaking great write!! ~andrea~


On Wednesday June 14th, 2006, MindRape (891) writes:
you don't think you can ever out do this one? are you kidding me? Is that why you have never tried? is that why you quit posting....:/ I not only knew you had this in you but I know there's a shitload more :P i wish we hadn't lost touch. i blame myself


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, the dried flower (82) writes:
this is a great poem and i got a lot of meaning out of it. keep writing, who knows, you just mite out do this one.


On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, Dommi (131) writes:
This was beautiful! I especially loved the rhyme scheme and the form. Different, but with feelings so familiar. Wonderful Lady :) <3Dommi


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:
I am glad that you liked this Dommi. At present, I consider this my "Masterpiece". I don't think I can ever "out-do" this one.. Hard to image that one can create something so beautiful, when experiencing the agony of being left in the dust, by someone


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:
you truly love. I'm in awe of it myself, and I wrote it! LOL.. Can't believe I had it in me.


On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
I can't believe right now I have so much empathy for a flower... your descriptions and flow are outstanding. :::OLd


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:
Thank you OLd SouL, I am glad that you enjoyed it.. :)


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Magnificent!! You satisfy my ache for beautiful poetry...Wonderful; simply wonderful. ~Faerie~


On Sunday June 6th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
That gave me chills, and tears. Wonderful poem...I have to read it again.


On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, Antony (44) writes:
That was kind of sad. Naturally this is about much more than a flower, but I did picture a flower as I read it. Great read.


On Monday December 22nd, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:
beautiful and vivid imagery... may the elements of this decomposed flower find identity in the next flowering creation in which its element take it up... Peace, love, and a Merry x-mas to you from Christ Vice!


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:
Interesting...wonderful use of a flower prop.-Kefka


On Wednesday July 23rd, 2003, DarkPoet (230) writes:
You can always pull a tear from a guy. This is an excellent poem.


On Monday May 19th, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:
i love this poem...the flower struggling to live and giving up in defeat. beautiful and touching.


On Monday April 21st, 2003, Jonas (866) writes:
the rhyme scheme was not intrusive at all... very much added to an excellent piece... well put together, nostalgic, sad and lonely. excellent piece.


On Monday April 21st, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (694) writes:
This is a special piece - lovely writing. Ciao, T/S


On Tuesday April 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:
It is a master piece, but you have many Lady Ahz. Pleasure to read your work.


On Tuesday April 8th, 2003, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:
Thank you Requiem.. :) I'm happy that you enjoyed my work.


On Tuesday April 8th, 2003, cre (508) writes:
Oh! I LOVE this one. First of all, this is one of my very favorite rhyming schemes. And you did it with excellence. I can really feel this write, so heartbreaking .. has me in tears almost. Great write.



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