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Down a dark corrider
I walk on padded feet,
A fat woman enjoys herself,
Upon a padded seat.

She grins at me,
Such joy on her face,
Now what you'd expect,
In this awful place.

Screams in the night,
Laughter at noon.
You've gotta move fast,
For they'll be here soon.

Don'w want to be caught,
No place to escape,
Your body they abuse,
Your mind, they rape.

I'm safe in my room,
The sound of a Bell.
I'm safe now, I'm safe now,
Within my padded cell.



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On Saturday March 25th, 2006, monalisamarie (149) writes:
such structure and vast attention to detail. you are impressive!


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, Lotophagi (459) writes:
lovely metre and lyrical flow..... Thank you.


On Sunday March 7th, 2004, Tracer (143) writes:
"she grins at me", I saw great imagery in this piece, thanks for the insite...^vTracerv^


On Saturday September 27th, 2003, wilted (273) writes:
I've always had a thing for asylums...i just thought they were interesting how creepy they can be. This brings out that terrifying goodness that i think they hold about them. Nice write. k.i.r.s.t.y.n


On Friday September 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
the creepy thought of being trapped in an asylum sends shivers down my back


On Tuesday August 5th, 2003, Deliverence (813) writes:
Nice...tho i hate asylums for some reason...i dunno maybe cuz i'll eventully end up in one. heh.-Kefka


On Friday May 2nd, 2003, DoctorAsh (512) writes:
hehehe ... i was completely unaware of the title until i ended up on the last stanza ... right there in the room next to you, nice discriptive ;,


On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Stranger (291) writes:
I see you have been to my place. Nice work.


On Tuesday April 8th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
Insanity is the doom of all genius, and that is what this is, Genius


On Sunday March 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:
good description


On Monday June 30th, 2003, boughtwithblood (297) writes:
creepy.. saw bizarre things when i read this.. nice job



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