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I spoke amongst the stars
Rolling pebbles on my fingertips
Foraging for depth
In the breeze of volumes you breathed.

The air followed no formula
I inhaled, choking on fireflies
As they only manage to gleam
When I turn away

Sopping wet from misconstrusions
The sweat dripping onto me
Tastes like lies
Reaking a proof, percent and concentration
My liver couldn't fathom

And you say to me
"A sunrise compares not
To dusk
Anyway.
A girl such as you
Has many an opportunity
To catch a glimpse."

I plead to disagree
As the fireflies retreat to slumber
I plea to myself
To fake enthusiasm
A little bit better.

And I slip fire down
Swallow silently
Knowing well,
I will save my sunrise for another day....



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On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
oh, how i miss your words. but this was quite mindquenching. the visuals were nicely executed..and the flow was fantastic. nicely done sue...


On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:
Wow with SIX I agree this is very intense. I love it. It is almost beyond words and the words that I think of can't even compare. Keep it dark. -Munkey-


On Thursday August 12th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:
fucking INTENSE! LOVE the way it feels to read this so raw.. so rare..tells me right now i don't care! but tommorrow bet your ass i will dare! AWESOMe!!! *669*


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:
item one on a shortlist within a long list of things that weren't supposed to happen .. pinpoints of hope need to be held and protected as the hailstorm has you stinging


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:
all over ... minutes turn hours turn years ... but there is more , there is daybreak , there is "after" ... everything washes away enough to feel the sun's warmth ... this work bashed my brains in ... yeah ...it did ... songsung ... funguy


On Monday August 2nd, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
excellent write! i particularly love the penultimate stanza: those last three lines i know all too well. beautifully done.


On Monday August 2nd, 2004, violetflames (13) writes:
wow. That is absolutely gorgeous.


On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:
i love the wording of this,stylishly crafted and greatly described imagery,and i liked the qouted verse,superb


On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Soulseeker (120) writes:
Wow... It's a gift to be able to describe such a thing without really having to say what you are talking about. A wonderful write... Bethany



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