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Hiding in the subtle itch
Of tired tendrils tucked away
My mind's a treadmill
Slumping in repetition.

Background vibrancies nibble at earlobes
Twisting my earrings
I blink into daylight to find
The same five songs
Playing for days.

My lips are dry but I continue to lick them
Continue to move and reach and thrive
In confusion of the day
In question of the time.

I'm pulling down Christmas lights
Looking for presents in every bottle
With names that mean nothing to me.
Christmas near July.

I stole this poem from a drunk girl
Or maybe I was the drunk girl who stole the poem.
Then again,
Ego shattered ownership, isn't half bad.

Because I am night and day and dawn
There is no dusk in me time
I stole the sober girls identity
She took my morality.

I wake up with her words
And a half imprint of remembrance
Tattooed in shanty inks
On the back of my hand.

I push through the prescriptions
And dialated eyes
For something to wet my lips
Burn my lungs,
And mute to my mind
What the girl the night before
Has sung.



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On Wednesday January 3rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
this was marvelous


On Friday October 8th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
very well written, loved the ending to this..And mute to my mind What the girl the night before Has sung. .. i can relate.. great write


On Sunday August 8th, 2004, Zara Synn (76) writes:
I always love to read things that I can apply to myself, i found it stunning.


On Friday June 18th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
now this is poetry. confusion in identity. whether drunk or sober...questions all your actions and motives...totally kept me interested. well done sue:)


On Thursday June 17th, 2004, nell (328) writes:
thie was excellent although it is sad that to make your muse come out you need to "wet your lips", easy to relate to overall, good write=)


On Thursday June 17th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
_your writing twists my brain into a pretzel...i'm smirking right now and i don't know why...i guess it's because your poetry is so pleasing to me...i dunno...anyway,lovely piece...*hugs and kisses*thanx,Sue.:)tim


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
a wonderful write...with good descriptions and use of words...awesome! -MeL-


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
the first two stanzas are incredible, that seemed to some up my(souldestroying )day at work repetitive midst blurring radio, this poem is trulystunning tho, original_ a terrific read


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:
Nice :-) That was awesome!


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
wow...wow...WOWwow.wow.. Have you guessed yet that I like this.. love this.. enough to push me over the edge and add you as a favorite. *drools* :::OLd



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