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TIM-
you're much cooler than the BRIM
of your HAT.
No one wants to hit you with a BASEballBAT.
A thug cheerleader would CALL you "PHAT"
I can't think of anything that's good to RHYME with THAT
When you're down I'll buy you A fruitBASK...AT.
The rhyme scheme falls under poetic license so DEAL with THAT.
SUICIDESEASON-
you are one of the REASONS I post my THOUGHTS
I must admit it's kinda fun to BEEEE your BOSS.
I'm up on hygeine but you don't even NEED to FLOSS
One of my favorite words is AL-ba-TROSS
You never ever seem to MAKE me CROSS
If you were ever to leave it'd BEEE our LOSS
If you had hope in a good ending that HOPE is LOST.

(If you're ever down check it out Tim...! I woke up after not sleeping for FOREVER and this is the first thing that popped in my head, i was kinda hopping from one leg to another while singing it under my breathe. I keep thinking of three's company when i read it over though... weird....)



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On Monday August 29th, 2005, blue (1751) writes:
lmao!! wow.. Rev, you get all the hot chicks don't you.. my sister is gonna freak when she hears about this! And you! Little Susie.. hoppin' around with the Rev in mind, tsk tsk :) You both get a cookie. ~b


On Monday November 29th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
The ending is brilliant!


On Thursday July 8th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
i cant get this thing out of my head... GGAHHH!!


On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
best poem ever!!!! :D


On Thursday May 6th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
I freakin' love it! lol How fun and a smile so contagious. I think this is one of the best tributes I have ever read. *giggles* YAY! :::OLd


On Saturday May 1st, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
this is genius! what a fun wonderful tribute -


On Sunday May 2nd, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
ha! genius exactly! this is a classic =) *manylaughs*


On Friday April 30th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:
_i love you,Sue...that's the only thing that i am thinking right now...oh,and i have to keep resisting the urge to hug my monitor...i'm sorry...words are failing me...thank you,Sue.i love you.=)Sexy sexy Tim


On Thursday April 29th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
Ahhh Sue, this kicks serious butt. you should try sleep deprivation more often!!! Love your work as always.


On Thursday April 29th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
a vary interesting piece, enjoyed it alot though.~~~Grave



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