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I trace the shadows you cast upon my wall
With thick black markers
Sanctified in memory and lost stale airs
Living in the unwashed dreams
Of the closest vacancy you can find
Even now, in this hollowed place
Where I am left to my memories.

The sounds echo down corridors
To rotted entry ways and fruitless ends
In the maze silence creates...
Silk drapes that were your bedsheets
find their place
Windsoaked in remembrance.



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On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, sixsixnine (566) writes:
you're FUCKING extreamLY talenTED>> such few words so much to trip on .. great write! * 669 *


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:
vivid rememberances ... snapshots , and whole scenes ... dreamy write .. seemingly about stepping away backwards ... great stuff... funguy


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
This has such a hollow beauty about it, with the descriptives you use.. It really appeals to me. Well done for writing such a perceptively brilliant piece. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
'hollow beauty'... this is just right. :) excellent closing line in particular. lovely write.


On Sunday April 18th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_*nods like a madman*yes,purr,brilliant closing...memories...so beautiful,so full of energy.awesome,Dear Sue.:)tim



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